OOh. sneaky Labyrinth. very very sneaky. Okay, i'm ready for chapter 2 now!

M, nice premise. VERY interesting. Can't wait to see what you do with it - best of luck!

Oh, poor Jareth. Wow, a most excellent story thus far. I like your characters so far (especially Gary.I actually have a gay friend named Gary ) and the way you gave the Labyrinth a voice. I can't wait to read more. Keep writing!

Hmm. Interesting start. I eagerly await the next installment. So.HURRY UP! ;)

*grins* now this is going to be a great story. Love it!

hail again to logic that is scattered! very good beginning. i liked your other laby fic so plz upload soon! _

*kitty*

I like the idea of the Labyrinth having a mind of it's own. Others have protrayed it as a living entity, but not one that could think on it's own. Please continue the story. I really want to see more.

I am so confused! But in a good way-please keep on going, as usual you write one paragraph and I'm hooked!

Great! A new story.I'm so excited. I hope this one is as enticing as the last. Good start.the labyrinth is kinda freaky.

i love this please update soon 'cause i can't wait!

Heikgan

I love this story already! "A Necessary Deception" was absolutely great, and I can't wait to read more of your work!

As ususal, you do not disappoint. Perhaps this will be another story to add to my batch of "favorites"?

Solea

Yes! Another story from one of my favorite authors. I can already tell this is going to be great.you've built wonderful tension already.

Sarah should have known better than to accept such an ambiguous agreement, even in her dreams.(grins).

This looks like it's going to be very, very interesting.

BTW - I absolutely loved your other story, loved the structure of the underground society and the explanation for Sarah's run through the labyrinth.

Are you sticking with that premise during this story, or are you changing it?

Yes! At last other fanfic by you!. I loved A Neccesary Deception and I think that this one is going to delight me as much as the first. The beginning is great! I am looking forward the next chapters.