Jarel Kortan 2005-09-08 . chapter 33That was really good, wel thought and executed. I applaude your efforts. I look forward to reading the next one. |
Jarel Kortan 2005-09-06 . chapter 16I remember the comentary from "The Empire Strikes Back" behind the scenes or somthing nut in Star Wars a kiss is vary surious like the "equivalent to intercourse", hey there words not mine. I think its was on the "Empire of Dreams" documentory on the bonus 4th disc. I'm just gonna shut up now. |
Arein 2004-11-30 . chapter 33Very good and so beautiful. I loved that they get to be together, lightsaber duel were awesome, and the plot wasn't too shabby either. Please write again soon. |
SilveryMoons 2004-10-24 . chapter 33I loved it... I adored it! I... well... let's just say I liked it very much. XD
The ending was my favorite part (surprise, surprise.) Helga and Arnold shall be together! POWA TO THEM! ...Nevermind...
Oh, and I must thank you for reviewing the first chapter of my story. There WILL be more. I know you can't wait! xD ..What? Can't a girl have some high self-esteem?
Once again, brilliant story.
Kristie |
E.J. 2004-08-30 . chapter 34 Bravo.Great story. |
Demile 2004-08-30 . chapter 35Yay! They could stay together! W00T! Hehe... no actual battle droids, droidekas and Galactic Republic Soldiers were harmed in the making.
Wonderful fic Carl, absolutely fantastic.
I can't wait to read your upcoming works and updates of The Broken Locket and other fics (*nudge nudge*)
May the force be with you!
-Demile |
Pensively-drifting 2004-08-30 . chapter 35sweet... good fic ^.^v |
AllieCat1 2004-08-30 . chapter 34Hey Carl!
WOW I can't believe this story is finished...it is a little sad when you finish a story isn't it? However this was a masterpiece just like all your other stories sweetie:) I'm SO happy that Arnold and Helga got want they both wanted...to be together and the sunset was beautiful...remember my story "Hidden Secrets"...I probably think that was one of my best stories...mostly because that was my first story that i posted on ff.net which you helped me write...of course any story with substance and romance in it is a good story:) You are a GREAT writer, you just need to keep finding the stories that you were meant to write just like and i don't mean to be contriversial...Linda Blair was meant to play that role in "The Exoricst"...well I'll let you go...looking forward to the next story that you will write:)
~Love Allison(aka AllieCat) |
Jae B 2004-08-29 . chapter 35Don't worry, Carl, I'm still working on my own fanfic. It's the "thinking" process that takes me so long to update a chapter. lol! I'll try my best to keep HA! alive. Oh, yeah, like I've said before, the "force" is always with me. I'll be looking forward to reading your new, as well as your current fanfics. May the force be with YOU!! |
Jae B 2004-08-29 . chapter 34Aweome job with the Brainy scenario! LOL! This quite a sentimental, but nice ending. Keep on shaping stories as successful as this one. You have the "force" within you to do it! |
Demile 2004-08-26 . chapter 33Nice chapter! I loved the fashion police ticket that Phoebe pulled on Rhonda. I can't wait for the last chapter! Update soon!
-Demile |
BellaMay76 2004-08-25 . chapter 8Weesa fixed it! Weesa fixed it! LOL! I love Li-La Binks!! And Sid 3PO? You are so imaginative! Great use of humor and romance, I am so glad I finally decided to read this one! See you next chapter! |
BellaMay76 2004-08-25 . chapter 5I love that you made Lila into Jar-Jar's character...now she gets to be just what she is in the Arnold universe, sweet but extremley fricking annoying, and occasionally quite funny. You did such an excellent job setting the characters in the proper roles!! Onto the next chapter! |
BellaMay76 2004-08-25 . chapter 4I knew Darth Curly wouldn't be able to keep his "hands" to himself around newly appointed Viceroy Rhonda! I am loving this story, I have always had an afinity towards parodies, but this one is particularly humourous! LOVE IT!! |
BellaMay76 2004-08-25 . chapter 2I have seen this story for a long time now and apologize for my extreme lateness in reading it..."I will not condone a course of action that will put cheese on my pastrami sandwhich?" THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! Pure Gold, I can't wait to read more! |