This was really neat; It's kinda like my "Unhappy Childhood" fanfic that's also here at FF.net. (Read please? Review pretty please?) Making you feel pity for people you at first didn't think deserved it.

The inclusion of Thomas makes it good too. (Not as good as an Eike inclusion, but oh well.YAY EIKE!)

I still feel more sorry for Samus and Reed however. It'd be neat if you somehow adressed the fact that she actually liked the two of them. (No, not like that, you sickos. As in "enjoys their company".)

Good stuff overall. I now consider you a sister/brother-in-arms in the writing of obscure characters no one else cares about! *DEL! salutes and marches off, back to her laptop*

Oh, wow! I've always benn some what of a Lilly fan but this fic has helped me really open to my Lilly loving side!

All in all, a nice little story.

nice fic! This really made me sympathesize more with Lilly.I'd probably feel the same way if my father never was there for me. Thomas seemed okay to me too. Well keep writing!

Well, I liked it. Make some more!

Oh. this is sweet. I don't think it's OOC for Thomas to be curious at all, and you did a wonderful job getting into Lilly's head. Makes her a lot less one-dimensional. There's a few spelling errors, but overall, good job!

kewl story dude! wicked! keep ritin!! dat roked! keep it up!!