This is a good story. I enjoy reading it. I have a question though, a little OT. What exactly does the Elvish mean and where do you get your translations?

This is getting good!! That is the Lay he is singing, is it not?? I want 2 c another chapter soon!! About when he met Arwen. Well written and write another chappie soon!!

Good. :) I liked the beginning with aragorn at the grave and then going back to the past. I also liked his birthday.
But the meeting with Arwen... It was love at first sight for Aragorn, but propsal? I don't think Aragorn would have asked her/Elrond to marry him/her after so short time. Thats a huge step, special since it's a man/elf relationship...
they hardly knew each other, and I don't think Aragorn ever (after knowing her longer) took her choice easy.
But except from that I think the story was good.

very good, even thou that is how it happens in the book, i think lord Elrond could have handled things differently, and good lood kid you just met the women, and you want to marry her?

This is a nice beginning. It would be interesting to see a story that explains the movie interpretation of Aragorn's reluctance in some realistic way.

It sounds promising, keep going.