plzzz update the story...

keep going its good

cool i didnt know they had fanfic for this show i havent watched this show in a long time nikki is the italian girl that works with bombs and jhonny is the black guy right im intrested in reading more update soon
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u suck u can't write i hate ur right lizzie isn't the stupid whore u are fag

love from CHEATLETHEFAG

p. STUPID BITCH

aw how romantic. great story i could see nikki and johnny become a couple. please continue

I cant wait to read more!

And don't listen to slayer, shes a littel wierd in the head! The whole hellmouth thing and the chip in the head, is her only way she can understaind things, things in her own world. LoL

Nice start. I only wished that it was longer. I hope you'll update regularly.

.I dont mean to be rude or mean, cause i know its fiction and all..but im sorry to say that this story is completly the biggest N/J shipper in the world, but i really couldnt see that if they were on the hellmouth, and he was a vampire with a chip in head and a soul and she was the slayer, then i could be believe it..or myabe if they were both vampires, and he was cursed with a soul, and then when they got all horizonal she got pregant cause he has a soul, and then she had to stake herself to have the baby cause shes techinically not alive, and then the baby gets taken away by this guy which a vengence thing against them and goes to this hell demention, and their kid comes back as like a teenager and realy hates johnny, cause hes a vampire with a i could belive it.

Slayer

Great story. I've been waiting for a story just like this. PLEASE continue