That was one of the most amazing fanfics I've read in a long time! Omg That was so well written and amazingly worded! I loved it!

Could the furnace of desire get ever hotter?

Wow. Burning 1400 degrees fire.

Ohdear, I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry when Albus demanded that Snape sleep, and that Albus would watch over him and Lucius. You paint a very convincing pair of lovers.

Wow. Just...Wow. I LOVED THIS! and you are one of the few fanfic writers who can make Dumbledore actually sound like Dumbledore!

This is a really wonderful story, can’t remember if I’ve reviewed it before but I know I started reading it at some point but never finished.

Agh, I feel stupid, but…hmm…was Sex planning from the very beginning to tell Lucius what he had found out about that night? Because it looked like Sev had not wanted to talk about at first and Lucius was the one doing the breaking. So did Sev decided after the fact, s to speak, to tell Lucius that it wasn’t the Aurors who had killed Evan and Charles but it was something staged by Voldmort? Another thing I don’t quite understand…how could it have been planned that Sev would be killed by one of the Aurors if Sev wasn’t even sent on the assignment?

Anyway! Still loved it, very well written :D

Beautifully written. This was an amazing story. The characterization was brilliant. Thanks for your sharing such a great story.

Very vivid, very realistic, and very detailed. Wonderfully weaved :D

V.

Brilliant! I loved this story, thanks for writing such a thrilling, eloquent, wonderful piece. Your style is excellent, I'll definitely keep my eyes open for more of your work.

This was a great chapter. You have an excellent writing style, and I also very much approve of the hints of philosophy you're embedding in the train of thoughts. Wonderful read.

Hello!

Just a little rev to tell you how much I loved your story!

You distillated angst like a true potion master! I loved the way Lucius' goal (break and mend Severus) evolved and reversed...

And the end was great: full of hope for them two...

Would you mind writting a sequel?

See you maybe

Corail

Painful, raw, realistic, mindblowing... This is really and incredible work of psychological drama. Thank you for sharing it. -Clare

Your writing is so powerful... I never read slash but I've been reading a bit of LM/HG and SS HG and just kind of wandered into this. It is such a very deep psychological study. There are two lines that for me really broke my heart...

""Don't stop touching me please never stop touching me!" he gasped when Severus freed his mouth.

There was a small, broken sound from deep in Severus' throat, "I never stopped." "

So beautiful. -Clare

Very nice story. Beautiful. Love it. Can't think of anything else to say but that it is truly lovely and fascinating.

Ah, such a good story! I've been listening to Something I Can Never Have by Nine Inch Nails the entire time, and my room is dark as always - it's such a fitting angst and froth of drama. Very enjoyable.