A pretty good story *almost* completely ruined by atrocious use of language. Fair enough, getting tenses and vocabulary use correct can be hard if English isn't your first tongue, but there is absolutely *no* excuse for mis-spelling proper names (Rubeus HAGRID being the most obvious -- but not the only -- example; in fact you made a total hash of pretty much the entire Hogwarts section.).

Great job, looking forward to more.

Wow both of these were really good, If you are going through with the next sequel, that would be extremely awesome. I loved how you had them have the more than 1 fiancee thing, cept I'd rather not have Kodachi as one of them. Me I'm a Ryoga fan and I'm very happy you brought him back in as opposed to him being an **. This Was really good and I hope you do make a sequel.

All I can say for the gang is 'OH **!'

Interesting twist at the end there.

GREAT CHAPTER! I see one mistake, the fifth head is a white dragon and it use a cone of cold.

GREAT CHAPTER!

I just loved this story. it was great. I'm so glad that you finally finished it. it was a great ending.

wow great story. is there gonna be a evangelion tie in? and will we see kun lao again?

Interesting.
One question:
HOW IS KASUMI, LINA INVERSE'S REINCARNATION?

I could see Ranko as being her, I could even see Akane, or Nabiki, but KASUMI?

Wow a very exiting and surprising ending.
Not only do they deal with Kun-Lao, they also deal with a devil in carnate gosddess as well.

But if Gendo is Kun-Lao's new host and FR-3 isn't a sequel where will this go?

Great story either way.

dennisud

Paladine cannot banish Taky because of the fragile nature of Krynn's balance. Tiamat is another story. Further more, if you are using 2ed cosmology, Takhisis and Tiamat live in Avernus, First Layer of the Nine Hells of Baator. Even more, gods can only be destroyed by other gods. Dragon Slave wouldn't tickle the Dark Queen who was a Greater Goddess with 18 Divine Ranks. The Faerunian gods of darkness; ie. Bane, Velsharoon, Shar, etc are more suitable for the role. With their salient divine abilities, Ranma wouldn't even come close to scratching even a Demigod!

Writers block still?

Still around?

THIS IS THE BEST I'VE READ PLEASE UPDATE,NOT ONLY IS THIS ORIGINAL BUT YOU LEFT A SCREAMING CLIFFHANGER! CONGRADULATIONS ON A GREAT PIECE OF WORK!