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TheHard
2009-01-16 . chapter 9
What a nice story! I Like the way you trow Ranma into one problem thru another :D... and your description of the fights is really good!

This is going to end with Ranma and Kasumi, right? or, I hope that was the intention, at least... but, after eight years without updates... well, it was funny anyway, thanks for sharing :)

Hey, can you recomend me some nice Ranma/Kasumi fics out there? thanks :)
anon
2008-01-07 . chapter 1
Good chapter, but the formatting makes it a little ** the eyes. If you get a chance to re-edit it, try having more characters per line (perhaps 80 to 100) and a blank line inbetween paragraphs.
QundraDraconum
2007-12-19 . chapter 9
without a doubt the greatest AU Ranma story Ive ever read. It's criminal that you left it like this and I hope you, or someone else continues this.
addicted03
2007-07-31 . chapter 1
Been waiting for an update for months! :(
Please tell me you won't leave us hanging!
I'm really looking forward when Ukyou & Shampoo come into the picture...
This is a work of art! So update soon! ^_^
dogbertcarroll
2007-05-21 . chapter 9
Cool.
dogbertcarroll
2007-05-21 . chapter 7
And reguardless of the path his life takes, Ranma will always
have people tangling his love life into a mass of conflicts.
Nysk
2006-04-12 . chapter 9
Wonderful story, wish there were more chapters!
Mercenaryhmster
2005-08-05 . chapter 1
not bad, but please work on the layout, the close-cropped sentences are murder on my eyes!
migele
2005-04-11 . chapter 9
Oh my god, you avoided the fiancees problem but Ranmas life is still far from easy!
great work!
migi
Drkjester
2005-01-08 . chapter 1
I just read your story over at cork. Hope it isn't completely dead but seen the last update of most your stories.
GJWKtfg
2004-12-20 . chapter 9
I too think this is a great take on the Ranma universe. It seems unlikely after several years, but I would very much enjoy more.

Thanks for writing
Geoff
dogbertcarroll
2004-10-14 . chapter 6
Ranma's thought about understanding Kasumi were great, wrong but fitting!

*grin*

Kinda of Ironic to see a Wrecking Crew against the NWC.

Nice touch!

Fantastic fight scene!

Cute bit with Kasumi.
dogbertcarroll
2004-10-11 . chapter 5
Showing Kyoko & Gosunkugi's twisted view of
reality was well done.

I like the cute bit with Ranma's picture and how
Hitomi got her start.
dogbertcarroll
2004-10-10 . chapter 4
Min-Lin was perfect. What's a Ranma story without
an overly affectionate amazon?

Kyoko was a nice twist.

"Akane, there's a bunch of girls dressed as
ninjas out here that say you're fat!"

LOL! Tendo secret technique!

Great chapter.
dogbertcarroll
2004-10-10 . chapter 3
Loved the inside joke about why Nabiki called him Kuno-chan.

*If he eats one of Akane's cookies, he'll think
she really dislikes him.*

LOL!

Kuno's twisted mental argument was also a lot of
fun to witness.
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