This story was so well-written! The chapter just flowed together and wasn't confusing at all. I just wanted to say thanks for a great story

Sweet. And poetic.

"Is it better to sink or to fly? Both have similar feelings of your limbs being useless. But one is trapped, and one is free. Which one does she mean to be?"

Just... lovely.

I actually REALLY liked that. You had the Stream of Conciousness stuff really working for you there. Great job- well writtern and a pleasure to read.

YES. I LOVED IT. THAT WAS PERFECT! (yes I'm screaming..)

I think Dimitri would approve of that writing very much. (wipes the smile off of her face and bits lower lip holding it there..)