OK, please don't take this as a flame, becuase your story was good, and I thought the idea was good, but, you have a few spelling mistakes such as "don" for don't and "amassed" for amazed(I think). Just for next time, "amassed"(pronounced ah-massed)means to gather or to get a bunch of stuff together. But, overall this was a good story and I think you are a good writer.
LadyMMac
P.S. some people here don't like it when you use "2" or "4" instead of spelling them out.:)

I'm sorry but this one disappointed me. Helga and Nadine are both out of character. Would Nadine ever listen to Christina? Would HELGA ever listen to or sing anything by Christina? I don't think they would. Hm...

I hope to see better then this from you in the future.

-Demi

hey i really like the story idea, but your formating could use a little work. if you'd want, i'd like to help beta read the story and help format. i hope you continue i really think it's cute!