OMG why is this so sad? but i should have guessed, i read the desription of the sequel and then knew that this would make me cry


BUT STILL! T.T

man! what a depressing end! it was good though.

hyper aren't you!

i was hoping the story would be longer or you would create a sequel although most are too lazy to respond

AW, BO I thought that he killed himself, and you knew that we would think that, so much for death, and that villian(kari) still can't figure it out

ahahahahahahahhahahahahahahaha darkness is so GOD, all well somebody start marking the TOMESTONE ahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, kari's ignorance has blinded her ha ha thats what she gets, great job

now things are really HEATING up, YAY, nice job

YEAH, this story is getting really good, great job

tsk tsk tsk, shame on you kari using your best friend to gain another's attention, nice set up and great start

That was a sweet fanfic I liked it very much, good job.

Actually, it would probably be better if you put the chapters from the sequal to the end of this one, renamed it and used the other's preview-paragraph. Then the story would all be in one place. You can't really end a thing with 'we'll get him back' like it's an episode, unless it's a chapter, it's just annoying for the readers.

Otherwise, really great fic! Time to read the other part!

SINCE MY BOYFRIEND ARCHANGEMON WANTED ME TO READ THIS I WAS LIKE HEY WHAT THE HECK ILL GO FOR IT

I READ THE SUMMARY AND AT FIRST I TOUGHT LIKE UNGH ANOTHER ONE OF THOSE AND THEN WOW !

U BLEW MY MIND WITH THIS STORY I JUST FINISH READING IT AND OMG IT THE GREATES I HAVE EVER SEEN ANGST ROMANCE AND NO A HAPPY ENDING JUST LIKE IN REAL ANIME

OH WHEN I MEET MY BOYFRIEND IM GOING TO GIVE HIM SUCH A KISS !

CAN YOU WRITTE TO ME WHEN U UPDATE ?

ARCHANGEWOMAN@HOTMAIL.COM

PS :ARCHANGEMON WAS RIGHT YOU ARE ONE GOOD WRITTER

i can't believe i haven't read this b4! it's really good! i luv takari so don't think i enjoy seeing the both of them suffer. takari 4ever!

You can't just leave that as the ending you HAVE to write a sequal.

ARCHANGEMON IS IN LOVE BABY !

OH THAT RE WRITTE WAS PURE GENIOUS OH MY THAT WAS MUCH NO THAT WAS WAY MUCH MUCH EXTREMELY BETTER THAN THE OTHER CHAPTER THIS WAS THE WAY TO GO !

THE SEQUEL YEAH I COULD SEE THAT NOW THAT TIME HAS PASSED KARI HAS TU SUFFER AS MUCH AS TK DID SO SHE MUST SUFFER TO BRING HIM BACK FROM DARKNESS YEAH !!

AND WHEN ITS ALL OVER TKS LAST WORDS

" LET JUST START OVER KARI "

BECAUSE AFTER HE HAS BEEN HURT SO MUCH HE WHOULD HAVE TO TAKE TIME AND ACCEPT KARI AGAIN AS IF THEY JUST MEET MUAHAHAHAH IM EVIL ANGST RULE AND YOU MY FRIEND ARE ONE OF THE FEW GOOD ANGST WRITTERS OUT THERE THIS CHAPTER PUTS YOU UP THERE WITH THE GREATES ANGST WRITTERS YES NICE INDEED

ARCHANGEMON

HAND OF FATE

I LOVE YOU !

THIS ANGST RULE YEAH UH MAKE A SCUBAWOMAN AND MAKE HER FALL IN LOVE WITH TK YEAH YEAH YEAH :D

ARCHANGEMON : SHUT UP AND GET AWAY !"

HAND OF FATE : NOW I LOVE HER MARRY ME !

ARCHANGEMON : SHUT UP SORRY I GOTTA GO GREAT GREAT STORY !

HAND OF FATE : Y EAH YEAH YEAH !