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Psychea
2009-10-09 . chapter 30
I finished reading.

It was beautiful.

...I can't believe that Squall still hasn't returned the "I love you", I've been so careful not to accidentally read ahead on the final chapter, haha. Been expecting it all the way through, but nope, you keep up the um... not sure what to call it. Suspense? Tension? ...Mystery? I don't know... But whatever, haha, just so long as there's something heart clenching up ahead. I'm glad there's a continuation, I don't think I'll ever want the story to end. And again, thank you for writing this.
Psychea
2009-10-07 . chapter 15
Marvelous explanation of Seifer and Rinoa's past... And everything else, of course. Man I wish I could make myself read slower, to make the story last. >_< I'm loving every word.
Psychea
2009-10-07 . chapter 14
Oh, you wrote out a perfect Seifer. Irresistibly amiable utter cunt. I've always loved his character, just as I hated him, and you've managed to keep both of those 'lines' in your story without tipping one way or the other, and without any pretentious crap that just wouldn't be him. Just perfect...
Psychea
2009-10-06 . chapter 2
Okay, I was right. I absolutely love it. ^_^
Psychea
2009-10-06 . chapter 1
So far I've only read the first part of the first chapter, but I already want to comment. This story seems to be exactly what I've been looking for. Thank you for it... I look forward to reading more. :)
Kitsune Kit
2009-09-13 . chapter 30
Wow I finally finished this massive, massive fic and I have to say I loved every minute of it!
MyFinalFantasy
2009-03-20 . chapter 1
Happy 'Dancing In Time' Anniversry Ashbear! Today's the day you finished this story! Might I say that all your stories sre at my high expectations? I congratulate you. Yeah, now that my royal tone is over, I really love your stories! In this one, their are constant moments where I could feel the emotion from the characters! Like when Squall and Rinoa fight, I get really upset, or when there in one of their more 'intense' moments, I look away for a bit as though I was intruding their private moment. I know, I sound like an imbecile. Sorry but however way you view this, I still love this story. Please conyinue writing for the sake of your friends (more like fans :D) Hope you update your other stories! Especially 'After The Fall.' Till I review again, goodbye and thsnk you!
DaughterOfSorceress-Lion
2009-01-24 . chapter 29
Hey, I was rereading this for like the third time... Because I can. And I just noticed. On June 20- A time to plant, When they're talking in Rinoa's room Squall sais that he's 19 and she's 18. They were both 17 in the game which means it would have had to start. between March 4 and August 22. Which I was like ok. But in this chapter Cid reallizes that Squall has a crapload of responsibiliteis and he is still only 18. So... Which one is it?
MyFinalFantasy
2009-01-24 . chapter 30
I really hope to see the next sequel to this story. It's wonderful! But by the looks of it, it's never been posted for 2 years. Did you post it yet? Or are you still writing. I've become addicted to this story so lets not keep your fans waiting. Thanks for posting this amazing story!
Fantasy Fan Girl
2009-01-19 . chapter 30
Absolutely incredible! A friend of mine (Freyjadour) told me that I had to read everything you have written and he is absolutely correct. I've been reading this over the last few weeks with just a chapter a day most of the time (or like today about 6 chapters) and it was amazing reading the entire thing.

First of all, you are an excellent writer. It was like reading a book only FF8, which was great. Honestly you could write a book though if you wanted, I mean this story was creative as it could have gotten while still being believeable for FF8. You have an amazing talent.

The story itself has a great mix of happiness, drama, romance,... pretty much everything. I love the way you express their feelings and how indepth you go. It's simply incredible and I can't wait to read more.

Keep writing- because I'm definately going to keep reading.

FFG- Jo
Chase
2008-09-07 . chapter 30
i like how you ended the story like you started it. i think you handle the characters really well. i wish i could write this good. i think i spent all weekend reading your stories my family thinks i am nuts for reading on the screen. i am sad there are no more chapters. i am waiting to see how this goes from here. this is the best fanstory i have read ever.
chase
2008-09-07 . chapter 26
i really enjoyed these last chapters. i like how they had misunderstands and then figured out their problems. it seems like real people when it is something like that.im glad their back and love seeing the other people back in there. this is really good glad i found this again.
Chase
2008-09-07 . chapter 20
i was surprised to see seifer back in there. i never liked him much but i guess he is okay if he stays there. it was funny when squall broke his nose. i like the talk in the dc room i could picture that. hope squall and rinoa get back to balam soon. i like it when they are there.
Chase
2008-09-07 . chapter 17
i put the cart before the horse and read the sequal first. up to chapter 16 was at classics again so i am glad there is more to read. after where you left it there this chapter was perfect. it was by far my favorite the part with the kids was very sweet. the way you have both interact is perfect. i dont know many writers who can pull this off with ease.
ElexirRasmus
2008-09-07 . chapter 30
just read the whole story and altrough i can't say that I enjoyed the whole storyline (espacily the part involving Rinoa and Seifer) but everything kind of fitted togather somehow. I'm gonna start reading the sequell now
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