sucks to be lucius, and draco too

Very good!

heartbreaking...

that was sad but really good

Thats so sad! But i love it!

very sweet.

Wow. That was so touching. *sniff* Kinda makes me wish it were a longer fic where Harry learns the truth on his own or something. *sigh* Brilliant.

That was pretty sad. And very original well sort of, more like a spin off of Severitus but very awesome. I felt sorry for Lucius. Me, sorry for Lucius Malfoy. Very unbelievable. But I felt even worse for Draco! He's overshadowed by Harry in everything he does, and on top of all that, he comes in second in his own father's heart. *cries* And the fact that Harry has a father, one he hates and doesn't know of, at least he would have had a father...

i loved this story i like Lucious as harrys father!

wow thats so cool

harry and draco are brothers...very interesting

very good

I know this is suppose to be a feel sorry for Lucius story but all I could think during the whole story was...POOR DRACO!it's awful to be second best. It's a really well written story and I'd love to read more, why do i keep coming across interesting story that only have one chapter in them? it's so annoying! anyways...POOR DRACO! *don't worry,I'll always love u better than that stupid scarhead!*

could you write more, it seemes to be unfinished.

Wow.That was interesting!I love it!It's well written._

You can't leave it there! You just can't! Write more to it,please!

Great story

Poor Lucius. i can feel tears in my eyes from this, it was beautiful. Congratulations! It was one of the best short fics ive ever read.