| Reviews for The Mirrorling |
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Thrillzone 4/10/04 . chapter 10:) |
The Lauderdale 4/5/04 . chapter 10Well, I have a number of reservations about this story, but it's long-completed, so I'll stick to what I do best: Orcs. You created an interesting character in Tiax-more than the simple brutes most writers make of them, he had flashes of personality (and he seemed to be pretty easy on Legolas, considering.) It felt like you were going to do more with him, so I can't help feeling sorry about how the story shafted him. The concept of the doppelgangers was an interesting one and would be worth exploring further, I think, in another LOTR fic. |
Babymeeko 2/2/04 . chapter 10That was so great real sad *sob* |
Yersi Fanel 12/28/03 . chapter 10This fic was just Lovely, you are a good author I really like this fic and the way of write was very good too, continue whit your works, are cool, see ya! |
Yersi Fanel 12/28/03 . chapter 1My God, thi loks so... hua! I'm Gonna read it!, Cool!, Legolas! |
Reona 4/19/03 . chapter 10I loved it. The story was fast paced but still good in its length. The plot was original and I saw no mistakes that soured the story, including the time discrepancy about Helm's Deep and the flooding of Isengard. I agree that it happened at different times. Plus, it had my two favorite characters, Aragorn & Legolas! |
willow 4/4/03 . chapter 1 I return! And have finally gotten around to starting to read this fic! Joy! I have no qualms with the story thus far, it all sounds interesting. I must say that I don't find the pairing quite as gripping, simply because I'm not a big A/L fan. ;; But the show must go on, and I like this anyways. One minor plot error that I found was the name of Aragorn's sword: it was originally Narsil, and then after being put back together was named "Anduril." ;; Just a minor detail. I think that the characterization in this quite accurate-I have yet to read more before I can form a final opinion. I take it that you're going with the movieverse version of Helm's Deep, then? Sounds good to me, I don't like the book version any more. *sweatdrop* I liked that little bit with the orcs at the end of the chapter, it gives them a glimmer of humanity that you normally don't see. *smiles* I'll RR more later, when I can summon enough energy to actually read more! I don't trust my judgement skills right now... |
Andmetwen 3/15/03 . chapter 10i loved it! too bad it ended. |
MoroTheWolfGod 3/12/03 . chapter 10AW! I want a sequal now! Please Continue! |
tbiris 3/11/03 . chapter 10well done, and well completed. This was great. |
lsdfjigslgfn 3/11/03 . chapter 10New chapter! *screams when she sees Arwen* AH. Make it go away! *clears throat* Heh. Sorry. I loved this story! I can't wait 'til your next one! I hope it's about an insane Legolas! |
Canon Police 3/11/03 . chapter 2 We cannot ticket this fic because we cannot read the whole thing, but we must point out something that looks like a serious plot loophole. How did the Orcs get Legolas to Saruman? The Ents flooded and destroyed Isengard on the same day as the Battle of Helm's deep, and Saruman was not able to accept prisoners. |
RecoveringTheSatellites 3/11/03 . chapter 5Hey how come (see below) has a chapter 7 and I don't. no fair :-( |
RecoveringTheSatellites 3/11/03 . chapter 6Woah. Wasn't it only last week that I reviewed your second chapter. Slow down girlie or your brain is going to overload. (I'm only jealous coz I suffer so much writers block) It's continuing well, it's an interesting idea and making them fight (sorta) was good. I'm looking forward to reading your next chapter. Oh, BTW I noticed that on your chapter selection thingy you've labelled chapter 3 chapter 2 again, only a minor discrepancy but thought you'd might wanna know. Andraste P.S. thanx for reviewing my stories. |
lsdfjigslgfn 3/10/03 . chapter 7No more insane Legolas. *is disappointed* I'm glad Aragorn finally knows what he did, although I think Legolas should have told Frodo first. Can't wait for the next xhapter! |