About awful marriage proposal lol

She didn't help too, but they are who they are and even that bad marriage proposal and a mad bride, make them cute :)

Awesome story!

Hilarious and sweet! I love it!

Lovely, lovely story! And you write Jonathan absolutely perfectly. :)

Another brilliant little fic. I love how you imagine these in-between scenes. Evelyn's narrative voice was fantastic, and as usual, your characterization was spot-on. Well done!

awesome! and funny, just like the movie! :) GREAT JOB!

loveitloveitloveit I actually laughed when I read this :D And I loved Rick/Evy :) This was one of the best fics I've read :)

Aww! This is WONDERFUL! Brilliantly written and characterised and Jonathan, in particular was great. He made me laugh really hard because I think you got him spot on even though he only had a few lines.

hahaha Jonathan is so awesome in this, and in the films actually. I love his last one-liner xD

great fic and nicely written as well

xx

You really seem to have a good grasp of Evelyn's 'voice' in this story. Writing dialogue that is believable and 'true to the characters' is difficult. I know, I've tried it. Even the professional writers who work for television shows have trouble from time to time. But you really pull it off here. Nice work.

Gah! I absolutely adored it! :D Ah, Jonathon... XD

This is seriously just what I needed. The romance made me smile like an idiot, and I haven't smiled like that in a long time. It felt great! Kudos for writing this! Loved it! *salutes you*

Kenzay

Hee! Very enjoyable, and very much in the tone of the characters' banter. I love your take on all of them! Totally sweet.

Aww! I love Evie as well! You portray both Rick and Evie in the way they were meant to be! _ I love your writing for The Mummy!

It's been like what six years since you published this and your still getting reviews, well, that should tell you how good this one shot story is. I just like add 127 reviews for a one shot WOW! Your know the story's good when its a one and has that many reviews...

Hope your kept up the brilliant writing.

*Afw*

126 reviews for a one-shot? Man I feel bad now. I've pretty much written a 15-chapter NOVEL and I've only 113! Just goes to show who's the better writer here. Well, I thought that was lovely. Really spectacular. So, well done!

Estora

LOVE IT. KEEP IT UP. IT NEARLY BROUGHT ME TO TEARS. ITS REALLY GOOD. :):):):):):):):):):):):)