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Kim The Manipaltive Little Mo 2003-10-30 . chapter 11
WooH! More fic. Love for Irina!
Delordra 2003-10-27 . chapter 11
Oh, that was so sad! Another wonderful chapter.
Delordra 2003-10-11 . chapter 1
This is really good! Great characterization. Keep writing, please; there's not enough good Irina fic out there.
Kim The Manipaltive Little Mo 2003-10-04 . chapter 10
Wow, Irina fic that's awesome. I think I might have to love you.
angela evans 2003-10-03 . chapter 10
Wow...Irina really intrigues me, and this look into her life is great. You've done an excellent job :D

"Dar fumbled for another roll of film, dipped the microphone away from the pair and was rewarded with a harsh reminder from Agent Vaughn."
Hee! Papa Vaughn! :)
snowangel 2003-07-09 . chapter 8
Wow. This story is amazingly well written. I love how your able to depict each character so distinctly in such precise chapter. I also really like the format, its very unique a nice change from alot of the other stories. Great writing! Cant't wait for more! :0)
Tasherie 2003-07-09 . chapter 8
I have been reading this over at sd-1 but I thought I would review here too. I really like the premise of this fic. It is original and you have executed it very well. I am very impressed that you are able to create such good characters in one short chapter but also retain the personality of Irina. Very nice! Each chapter is unique and very intriguing. I love this so far!
Tasherie 2003-04-25 . chapter 4
What an amazing idea for a story! I love your writing style and how you leave a little bit to the imagination. You definitely weave quite a story, I can't wait for what's next!
GeoGirl 2003-04-25 . chapter 4
Shannon,

I'll touch on that in the future (thanks for keeping me on my toes)! Thanks for reading everyone, your feedback and encouragement keep me writing!

GG
Shannon 2003-04-25 . chapter 4
Beautifully done. I had to read it twice through to understand everything that was happening, but after I did it made a lot more sense. This is one of my favorite stories. One thing, though - if Jack's the one kissing her & hugging her at the very end, how does she explain her bullet wound to the shoulder?
Jen 2003-04-10 . chapter 3
Fascinating, utterly fascinating. Beautifully written. Looking forward to more.
Brynne 2003-04-09 . chapter 3
OMG!! I love it! I thought the woman was Sydney but after that last scene, I wondered if it might be Irina. Or could the two be working together? Please update soon!
Margot 2003-03-11 . chapter 1
Jeez. pretty heavy stuff. It is brilliant though, don't get me wrong. I'm assuming that this is the infamous Irina Derevko you're writing about here. am I right?

-Margot
jhfortier 2003-03-10 . chapter 2
This story is incredible. Absolutely wonderful, well written, precise and with flare! Keep writing!! Can't wait to read about vaughn's dad (i'm assuming that this is Irina?) Keep posting!
D 2003-03-10 . chapter 2
I like it so far and am looking forward to seeing where you go with this.

One thing though: I wouldn't classify this as rated G. It's not kiddie material.
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