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phantom Miyagi 2006-06-16 . chapter 5
Wow, that was the greatist story ever, I loved the whole vampire thing, and specially loved the ending when Erik said "Christine you're mine forever."
Olethros 2003-12-13 . chapter 5
Oh but this was *fun*. What a fresh perspective on things and a nice twist on the classic ending. great great stuff. One small nitpick, and it might not even apply since there are a bazillion different versions of vampire stories, but I was under the impression that in order for someone to *become* a vampire, he must drink some of the vampire's blood after getting his own blood drained. Ohterwise, he just dies. Then again, the majority of my vampire knowledge comes from Buffy. :-D
bubabaloo 2003-05-25 . chapter 5
oh wow! Where have I been while you've been getting 27 reviews? *laughs* wow... you've outdone my fanfic for sure! Great job, however! I LOVED this! I couldn't stop reading! (I'm serious!) OK... *takes her chill pill* I'm alright now... I just ADORE your work! Great job!

~*S.J. Winter*~
Purple Mist 2003-05-20 . chapter 1
Hm... Phantom of the Opera meets Dracula. Woohoo!! I'm trippin'!!
Miranda7911 2003-05-13 . chapter 5
What a beautiful fic! Bravo! And nice job on actually completing it! Most people don't! Good job!
L.M.T.G 2003-05-07 . chapter 5
ungh! omg...wow...was...was that..the end? no..can't be...*drops to knees*don't ever end this story! please!
Erik's Girl 2003-05-05 . chapter 5
Yay! Happiness! Erik's happy, Christine's happy, and with a wonderful story plot. I loved it! It would be cool if you did a story of their lives afterward, though. Wonderfulness awesome!
Midasgirl 2003-05-05 . chapter 5
Aww :) Bless. I have to admit, you had me worried at the end of the last chapter! But ahh .. of course she had to come back :) I love the line, “My love, you just abandoned all abilities to do that.” Hehe! And I liked the description of the sensation of her touching his face. Sweetness!!
Riene 2003-05-04 . chapter 5
Ohh, you had me worried there for a moment she was leaving him! THe "walking in the sun" part was well-handled.

The despair scene was good, but I love the ending...

“You’ll what?” His breath caressed her ear.
“I’ll DIE!” she exclaimed vehemently.
He chuckled softly. “My love, you just abandoned all abilities to do that.”-Oh, good lines...

~Riene
Gryffindorscholar 2003-04-15 . chapter 4
This is really good, but a bit confusing for those of us who haven't seen Dance of the Vampires. Would you tell some of what was in the book in the next chapter please? Thanks.
Masked Rose 2003-04-13 . chapter 4
Aha! I loved this chapter. Exactly the kind of tension, distrust, and hesitancy I would expect. Very nicely done Christine, in my opinion. You solved the problems I had with it before. I hope you continue this, and soon.
MmeMarie 2003-04-11 . chapter 4
He he, I like the Dance of the Vampires/POTO crossover thing. Hey, its relevent! Crawford POTO 1988 - Crawford DOTV 2003
Midasgirl 2003-04-11 . chapter 4
Oh no! Oh no!! Oh, she can't have gone! Poor Erik - what on earth is he going to do now?! I loved the way you included the more unsavoury side of being a vampire, and also the way he would have known it was her even if he hadn't been a vampire! And VON KROLOCK! YAY! I haven't read a decent Tanz story for *ages*! I don't suppose we'll be seeing any more of him, will we? I love this :)
L.M.T.G 2003-04-10 . chapter 4
*deep breath*NO! Christine you IDIOT!

...including Giovanni was cool tho
Riene 2003-04-10 . chapter 4
An update...long have I waited for an update.

I was a bit worried that Christine would immediately capitulate to the whole vampire concept. I like the way she's worried about Erik, and is discomfitted as to the new direction their relationship is taking.

"We cannot build a relationship of trust if there are secrets between us."--great lines in here!

That was a good touch, having her leave Erik with the uncertainty of whether she can forgive him or not.

And as usual, you've left us hanging...

~Riene
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