This is amazing. I love the imagery - very poetic. The last line especially is so powerful... It gave me chills. The descriptions that create the scene and the overt, in-your-face symbolism - awesome.

you should write a story leading up to this and if you want to what happens after

Wow. I really like it. It's highly disturbing, but this is simply amazing writing. This is just so good. I'm still chilled. Your descriptions are amazing, simply amazing.

I didnt like the end...with the Harry Potter thing. But other wise...very clever, well written and discriptive. Very mysterious. Good job.
Macaday me a nut (and your one too!)

my god! Harry will never join the death eaters! not in a million year and at this piont voldemort would rather kill him than have him on the dark side I mean look at what harry has done to him 1 year old robs him of power 11 year old stops him from getting the sorcerers stone. the list goes on and harry hates him to much I mean he killed his parent and that meant he got sent to the dursleys and then one of his followers killed sirius on his orders! again the list goes on. you are a f* Idiot!

NO! Why did you make Harry a death eater, WHY? Anyways, I don't think this should be your last HP fic. but that might be just me!

Whoa...way poetic, very deep, moving, sinister, goth. Dark Harry? *shivers*

Whoa-what a strange, yet powerful fic.
Love the expression and description used.
Very Nicely Done
(PS I have a copy of Aydindril-do you want it sent to you? I can't seem to find your e-mail)

Not sure how to otherwise contact you, but in your profile, it said you no longer had Aydindril. Please contact me if you still need it. I saved it some time ago.

Lovely story, very moving. A lovely view on an alternate way for the Harry Potter series to go. You write exceptionally well and it will surely be a pity if this is your last Harry Potter fic.
I would however chance to ask about a past story of yours: Aydindril. I do not know the reasons behind it no longer being posted but I would dearly like to read it again. So if at all possible could you provide a link to it if archived elsewhere or perhaps email a copy to the address above.
I apologise for using a reveiw to bring up this but I saw no other way to contact you and the story was such a fine piece that I felt it wouldn't hurt to ask.
Thank you and I do hope you continue writing even if it is not in this fandom.
Arames

You can't stop writing HP! You're great.
Are you ever going to repost Aydindril? Or is it posted somewhere else? That is one of my absolute favorite Harry/Draco stories.
Carawen
carawenprose@aol.com

You were right. I do not want to know you. Your story is...interesting, as i kindly put it...
The story is very weird, and you have to remember, DESCRIBE!! DON'T TELL! And it is absouletly ridiculous that Harry will go to the 'shadows'.

simply ravishing, i'm sorry to hear that you have decided to stop writing at this particularly fine establishment. *raises glass of wine* to you, earth, may you change your mind and write once again.

very poetic and sensual. its too bad that you've decided to stop writing HP fics. You're very talendted. are you archived anywhere else? I could have sworn you had another fic about Harry who is a seer and dreams of a lengendary city. Has that been taken down?

Wow. That was a shocking ending. Sans the illogic (I can see no way Harry could ever join LV) this piece is really good. I love your descriptions of the light and the dark. You are a very talented writer and you're great at painting a picture with words. Oh, how I envy you. There's really nothing more to say here, so I won't annoy you any further with erratic babblings.