This is great! I love it and need to know what's next! :D

Amazing story! One thing though: It needs to be finished D: xD

Absolutely beautiful. The plot is almost as well-made as that of the Genesis titles. Actually, this would be a pretty neat premise for Ecco 3.

I just finished reading all of this and I'm quite interested in this story. Please do continue and finish it. ;_; This is quite good!

I wasn't expecting the pod to be so cold to Ecco. This most recent chapter may open up some twists.

This is such a great story. There are a few unanswered questions that I hope future chapters will answer. Questions like "Will Ecco's pod forgive him?". I'll look forward to these answers.

Please update this as quickly as possible. It has a bit of a following judging from the number of reviews. I'd say that it is possibly the best Ecco story so far.

what a great story

plz plz continue the story!
(bangs head aginst the wall repidedly... Owowowowow) I must know the rest, this is one of my favorite stories.
I want to know if Ember gets a happy ending or not.

Hmm. This chapter is more like a scene really.
I'll know what to say after we see Ember's reaction, and Ecco counter-action.

As an author, you need yo ask yourself an important question:
Do you know where you're going with this story?
Do you know how you want to get there?

These questions are import to prevent yourself from writing yourself into a corner.

Good luck. Read ya next time.

oo, i can't wait for you to write more!

Okay, I'm sure that the story is good, but I have a challenge to all writers. Try and make an Echo/Jaws crossover!

Um... Yeah. So... Where's the rest?

umm...please make more of the story. you kinda left it at a cliff-hanger. its really good, i wanna know the ending..

interesting, it looked as though mr. frederick was making moves on ember.

. . . .nice