I adore the voice in which you recount this.

You say it's rushed, but I say the flow is suiting and unique for this piece. It captures little moments and windows and time and conveys their feelings and dynamics successfully and succinctly.

+fav

This fits in perfectly to the other story and I love them both! wha tyou could do, instead of a full fledged story, is just little short snippets of their lives together, both before and after breakin up, before and after the 'Sano's Room' and 'to Err and Forgive' stories. Like what life'll be like when they try to clean up, excuse the pun, Sano's habits. That'd be real neat, eh? In any event, I'm heading back to your author page to read more of your stuff. You're really talented! good luck and keep up the good work!

-J

I love it! ^_^ *hugs Sano and Kenshin*

I absolutely *adore* the way you write fics.

"The bed, he liked. I couldn’t imagine why, although I liked it. We danced there, too."

You are a master of the euphemism and your ability to use it in/for just the right moment is beyond compare. :)

I liked it. All in all, although it was rather incomplete, you captured almost every positive and negative aspect of Sano and Kenshin's relationship.

nicely written. Too short, not enough depth. i really only like S/K if it's AU . . .

I totally loved this fanfic.
It was an amazing companion to "Sano's Room," and at least we almost know everything that went up to that one day in Sano's Room before they moved to Kenshin's place! ^-^
I love these stories! Great job, as usual!


~Spellcastre~

This is too good! I love it! *hugs story* Aw! I didn't think Sano's Room could get any better, but this is just great! I would not be upset in the least if you wrote a full-fledged AU based on these! *wink* *nudge* *wink* Keep it up, Fitz-dono!

hehehehe! grand!

Oh, Fitz continued Sano's Room! *grins* That was a really good story, and I hope you continue with this! *Sighs* There are SO FEW Sano and Kenshin fics out there.

*Shakes finger* You better not forget about "My Life" though! I'll be really upset if you do!

(I review that under my other name.^^)

*eats the story*

It's so beautiful!

Ugh. What I wouldn't give for a Lemon by Fitz. Yes, I am yaoi **. *really wants to see more from you.*





Fitz! You're awesome! I'm doing a contest! I'm giving stuff away!

http://clarus.twistedperspective.com/contest/contest_index.htm

Enter, because I love you.

Yay, the queen of AU messes a bit with the characters. I really like this little story. In fact, I like both stories. The biggest reason why I like this so much is that you manage to make them "realistic" boys.

(Sorry, I'll write you soon!)

May inspiration be with you!