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Azolean 6/22/10 . chapter 5
See, I don't care when crappy stories and bad writers leave their stuff unfinished. But the good ones doing that annoys the hell out of me. Couldn't you at least do a little add-on at the end that says something like "And then they all die on fire." To at least let us know you're not going to finish?
lauren hedgehog 11/2/06 . chapter 1
A wonderful, wonderful story :-) The plot, characterisations and writing are great :-) I hope that one day the muse returns and you can continue with the story ;-)
Akkarin11 5/7/06 . chapter 5
PLease update soon- or at least let your readers know if you have completly abandoned this story
Akkarin11 5/7/06 . chapter 3
Great story! My only suggestion is to proofread your work more carefully. You have used spellcheck, but there are a number of places where the wrong word has accidently been typed Ex "Yes , Mater( Mater means mother in german).
KimNYC 8/14/05 . chapter 5
Fantastic! I look forward to reading the rest of your story.
Ice Queen1 3/28/05 . chapter 5
Well, I've had this thing on my favorites list for quite some time and now I remember why I put it there. I just have one minor grammar thing to point out: it's "kidnapped" not "kidnaped". Very interesting story, can't wait to see you update. Hope you haven't abandoned this story, it's pretty good. I like Autumn and your depiction of Jules.
JennyJoy4 9/1/04 . chapter 5
Ooh! Ooh! What happens next? :) This is very well-written and with a FASCINATING plot! Can't wait till you update!
Jazz 2/12/04 . chapter 5
Great story! I hope you will eventually finish it.
sincerely
Jazz
Nev 5/31/03 . chapter 5
Wonderful story! I just found it today and hope you update it soon.
AliasJaneDoe 5/4/03 . chapter 5
Hey, just found this story. It's really interesting so far. Not enough people are writing in this fandom. I've thought about trying my hand at it, but I haven't seen the show in ages. Anyway, update soon, okay?
dianna 5/3/03 . chapter 5
more.more.more!
Ecri 5/2/03 . chapter 5
Wow! I like where this is going. Good characterization. I like Jules' reactions to his captors, and I thoroughly enjoyed Phileas and the phsychiatrist. Well done! Please write more soon!
Felicia 4/28/03 . chapter 5
Good intentions, really, but...eep?
Callista 4/21/03 . chapter 5
I'm enojoying this story much more than many others i have read. Please continue and not leave it as a wip fic. Keep on writing as well, you have a geninue talent at writing and a general knack for painting a scene in words, not many have that ability.
Vita 4/8/03 . chapter 4
Wow! Great story so far, really interesting. Please don't leave us hanging too much longer!
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