|Reviews for Alone in the dark|
| etol 9/20/09 . chapter 9
continue this please? :D :D
| Salysha 7/24/08 . chapter 9
Heyy... Cool story you have here. Hot, too. (Yes, please! Serve 'em hot.) Having Hwoarang dream the sexy scenes in chapter 7 is a great idea-haven't seen that before!
It moved a bit fast at times-the guys were quick to admit the dreaded l-word (love), when it is often portrayed as the last threshold and something larger than life. They were maybe a bit quick to shed tears, too. I realize this is an older story, but if you get round to writing more, you might iron out some of the grammar stuff on the way: get rid of the run-on sentences and add the missing commas and periods. Have a light overhaul, just so the story becomes easier to take in. :)
I got to wonder how traumatized Rio was to overhear in the last chapter, but he was a good sport about it, luckily. Good going, and I had a good time reading!
| leaf 8/1/07 . chapter 9
u now i'm not really good with this but I love your story and ur really funny i'll try. but pls update
the director could be well Lee and he could get the idea about making a gay porn movie after one day catching those two in the act because the couldn't wait (well hwoarang couldn't wait)behind the bushes
and then he starts to follow them around but if they accept it or not is your decision but i'm not seeing jin do it but hey it's your fic i know this is not much but i'm counting on your comedian skils to make it work just doing it because i REALLY want u to update
| Mizuki 2/2/06 . chapter 9
0.o THIS IS SO AWESOME! OMG! You HAVE to carry this on! NOW!
| LoveMeNot 1/6/06 . chapter 9
wow. even though your story is a little OOC...i really like it! its a really nice fic. i can't wait for the next update!
| Mulan Ayano 12/28/05 . chapter 5
Gr8 story!I liked it...It tells their thoughts and everythang!You're a good writer...I liked all chapters! You see I aint tryin' to piss you off as you say don't pissed you sound like you can murder somebody's broke a**!Anyway good story!It's easy to beleive that the whole thing is to good to be could be a BI!Gay Bitches!Psyche! If you publish books based on Jin & Hwoarang...I would buy every single one of them...!
| The-Dark's-Familiar 9/19/04 . chapter 9
Love you darling. Its so hard to find a good Hwojin or Jinrang these days. I love the characters and the humour and the slash and the slash and the slash and the slash...sorry I'm obsessive. Update soon! Wahoo!
| kandisi 6/12/04 . chapter 9
Lol, that was awesome. Very cute&funny. You make some of the best OC's I've every seen. Keep it up!
| Suchy 6/11/04 . chapter 9
I dunno if I reviewed this story yet but if I didn't you can, like, smack me or whatever. Well if I didn't...its good. And stuff. It was pretty funny too! Do continue! La la la la la I sound so stupid when I review stuff la la.
| ChibiShiva 6/11/04 . chapter 9
Can't believe I haven't reviewed that fic so far ._.' Really good _. Well, there's not just that Kinjo Mahatma who'd pay for hearing (and see) this XD!.
Keep it up! Me likes! _
| RubiSapphireSama 6/3/04 . chapter 1
| Kaio 3/1/04 . chapter 8
Yeah! Excellent ficcy.
| Chlover 2/4/04 . chapter 8
That was cute.
Where should I begin? You seem very informed of the characters pasts and portray them to the letter. Youre quick wit and humor is an extra entertaining touch. Your writing style is unique and gripping. And in a couple chapters, Hwoarang heard voices! Well I guess that was just his conscious but it was like he was hearing voices and that alone caused me to curse myself saying, "Why didn't I think of that?"
| slave4britney 9/22/03 . chapter 1
How beautifully written!
| Dillon 8/5/03 . chapter 7
Heh, cute. I like it. You need a beta reader, though. You've got Baek Do San as Beak, Tae Kwon Do as something to do with Teak, and more grammatical errors than you can lob a drunken Squirtle at. But it's a good story, nonetheless.