A great story. Very good.

oh...poor obi's not a failure...really great song fic! ehehe i love song fics...

Very well written-lots of emotion and gets the reader by the heart. I was so glad Qui came after him. Do you want your reviews to point out grammatical errors? If you do, I only noticed one. Where you said "the traveler didn't know where they were going," etc. It should have been "where he was going. On the contrary, he knew what direction he was heading," etc. Third person singular to be consistant in your sentence. I want to be helpful and constructive in my reviews, but usually I am in too much of a hurry and just want to let the author know how much I enjoyed the story. If this kind of thing would be appreciated by you, let me know and I'll try to do better reviews in the future.

WOW! This is REALLY good! Very sad, but very good. You had a very nice, very clear writing style. It's very refreshing to find a story with good A) a good plot, even if it's just a little story, and B) good writing style. Thanks so much! A very touching fic!

T.H.

Not usually into song fics at all Arldetta ;) But I truly enjoyed this. What a sad lonely trek our little padawan had--Oh, our Obi is so insecure, but it's not his fault at all. So was Qui following him, or just went looking for him? I took it that he'd been following, though you never really addressed it. Lovely little piece of angst and mush :)

--Shan

Hello again! This was great! But unfortunately I have no time to write anything good (or what I liked to) so perhaps, if my memory won't betray me, when I have time, I'll write a better review. If I'll just remember. But, please write something soon again *-*

Not original, but emotionally truthful and beautifully written. Obi is so needy and I love it when Qui-Gon is there to give him the reassurance he so desperately needs. Give us a story with a plot- a long one next time. Not that I have that much free time, but I would make time to read it. Just let me know, so I don't miss anything you do, OK? Thanks!

I like it! Do more stories! This is excellent!