it was really good, i can't say that i'm happy about the way that it ended, you killed Shido, *sob, sob* and made Cain-sama cry! *sob, sob* *hides in dark corner to cry*

WOW!! very nice and amusing story... what great imagination you have! i have some thoughts about the next chaptr... eheheh... MORE POWER TO YOU! ^_^

Shido's a rather aloof in this one isn't he? I Like how you change up POV's. It's a fun read.

...Damn...Could you write a sequel to this fic? Like a reincarnation fic? Make sure Cain and Shido get together in teh end though! Too much death...

yet another great fic.

Ths is such an interesting chapter.I like it.

awee!! that was so good!! I love it!! very very cool^__^ you actually made me feel bad for Cain o_o bravo! ^^;;
~*~Dawn~*~

Very sad ending. But it was a very good story. U should write another one. ^_^

Very sad but still VERY COOL! write more soon.

aw...i still like the story, it's good! Please don't stop, it's getting good. I want to know what's happened to Shido! Please update soon!

OH MY GOSH!! Hey this is good; Shido actually wants to be with Cain! Keep writing...onegai! But it seemed Cain was easily defeated. Well I really like it so I'll be waiting!

um... it was a good story but now I'm not so sure. I liked the first two chapters definately but now... I think perhaps your leaving out too much. The gaps are too wide. Suddenly Shido is willing to go with Cain after everything thats happened? There appears to be no struggle over it...
The chapters are still a little too short in my opinion but I've seen shorter... I really have. Anyways I hope this gets good again.

guardianmercury

WHAT! Since when does Shido like Cain again?
Oh well, it was still a good story.

yeah!! update!! another good chapter! keep it up, i can't wait for more!

really like the story hope to see more chapthers.