this is a brilliant story, reealy well written and very emotional. i like the luka/mark friendship - mark isn't in a lot of stories now a days. i also like that luka didnt die coz that would be sad.

So sad! But I'm glad he didn't die. That would've been too awful. And this is very well written; you really make your readers feel Luka's pain.

I really love the way you write and the way you explore Luka's deepest and painful feelings.

Thank you for this awesome piece of writting!

great story!

You did a good job bringing us up to 'The Suicide' and going beyond. A very interesting story.

Keep it up.