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contrarymotion
2006-12-19 . chapter 5
10 gold stars and a voyager christmas ornament for mentioning voyager in a CSI fic!! Love janeway...
J. Rockwell
2003-04-08 . chapter 10
That was a nice little piece. The angst was excellently balanced with humor and strong dialogue. I'm really impressed. I look forward to reading more from you Miss Jane. Keep surprising me, and I'll be pleased!
*Jorgy Rockwell*
Duckfeat
2003-04-08 . chapter 10
What a fantstic story. You rock, Jane! Jeez, was I ** when they found them. Loved how they recited one another's usual breakfast. Just an incredibly well done piece of work. Awesome theme, pacing, dialogue, ending;)
Melindotty
2003-04-08 . chapter 10
SOCUUTE!
generalnothingness
2003-04-08 . chapter 10
Jane rox my world! Totally loved your story. I liked the way you brought the characters together. I think I have probably read all your stories and I have to say that... I love all of them. Keep writing.
CrazyAngel
2003-04-08 . chapter 10
No Sara-Gil offspring, oh well. Some other time.

You know how some times authors include things that they do in their fics (i know i do) I’ve been doing some weird stuff since I started to watch the show (like trying to lift fingerprints from glass with scotch tape) but Jane, printing a table with powder milk? Never crossed my mind. LOL. Even if you just made it up, it’s a great line, and a really funny and believable mental image.

Interrupting their kissing match. . .hm, I wanted to kill you for that ;) No, not really. Anyways, wonderful chapter, a perfect way to end this wonderful fic. I can’t wait for another Jane fic!!

Crazy Angel.
thousand-miles
2003-04-08 . chapter 10
YEAH of course they are ready,I would be too. i say...bring it on!!(if I were Sara). It was getting hot hot hot in that bunker!! Damn, why did they come and save them? I would have loved to know where that was going!!
This was again a great fic by the Fanfiction Queen!! Yes indeed you are the queen!
Geena
vampire chick
2003-04-06 . chapter 9
"a graze of tongues?" there's an original line! great fic, plz update ASAP!
Shadow
2003-04-01 . chapter 9
MORE PLEASE! Can't wait...
shadow
2003-04-01 . chapter 1
Please continue with this story, its awesome!
MORE, MORE, MORE...
Melindotty
2003-03-27 . chapter 9
MOREMOREMORE!This does kinda remind me of the ff burinin love...
Crazyangel
2003-03-27 . chapter 9
Oh how many times have i taken apart a radio!
Can't you leave them there for a year or something? Maybe they'll end up having babies.

Anyways, loved the 9th chap!
But there's only ONE left?? Aw.

Angel.
Nik
2003-03-23 . chapter 9
OH, how in the world can you leave us hanging like that?! AH, MORE I SAY MORE!
Crazyangel
2003-03-21 . chapter 8
Aw. It's sad but comforting at the same time. I like the way you handled the hearing loss issue. That 'are you happy now?' was very real.

Angel.

Now i'm going to read chap 9
Duckfeat
2003-03-21 . chapter 9
Damn, but this is such an awesome story. Loving it! Great chapter. I so envy how you've built up to the moment.
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