Excellent story. I am so glad you finished it.

Nice to see that you finished this. I almost thought that something had happened to you. It was a great ending too. Nice job, on writing this whole great story.

Wow. Can i just say this ending was absolutely worth the wait! and dont worry about the corny ending, it fit perfectly! It was a pleasure to read, and i thoroughly enjoyed it! Then again i do adore Jen/Wes, so that was a plus. You fit the characters so well, and i could see this playing out in my head.

A wonderful and original story, Satori, and just freakin amazing. I do hope to see more stuff from you soon. Congratulations on a terrific tale :)

Until next time,

~Steph
White Time Ranger

i just started reading this story again is it ever going to be finished?

I think that this is a good story... do we have to wait another four years for the story to be finished?

Terrific - the sun breaks through the rain, so to speak. I loved the gradual change in Wes, reflected in the Nightmare surroundings. Very effective.

It's kind of sad to see this coming to an end. Sweet, but sad.

i loved this chapter. u took a long time to post it but it was worth waiting for, totally. i cant wait for the epilouge.

that was great! all the wait was worth it. i cant wait for the last chapter!

That was brilliant! Especially the ending. *swoon* hahaha :)
I liked those little flashback things from previous parts of the story. And you didn't, like, overly do it. I could even picture it in my head. (I love that part of reading.)
Another GREAT thing about this chapter is that it was pretty LONG! :D It really makes me happy when an author who hasn't updated in a while updates with a long chapter. ^_^
Anyway... Loved the chapter and most of all the whole story. :)
I hope to see the epilogue sometime soon-ish. ^_^

Great chapter. I really liked the interaction between Wes and Jen. It's good to have the old Wes back and I can't wait to see the final chapter.

ok. i just read the entire fanfic all over again. and im starting to REALLY want an update on this fic. i wanna know wat happened to jen and the black knight! please update soon!

O.M.G. This is one of the best stories I have read on here. The way it's written and the descriptions - I couldn't stop reading it. XD
Please update soon? Even though I'm kinda a late reviewer. ^_^;; (I just found this story yesterday.)
Anyway, I love it! Seriously. :D
Now, update soon, please?
-Lizzie

i've been loking aroung for some Time Force fics for a while when i found yours. This is an awesome story. You really have some kind of talent when you write these things. You can write seriously and still add some light moments in your story(like Eric in the middle of the battle.) I love Wes/Jen. My only problem is that you need to update! Can't wait to read the end.

Wow, just wow, that's what I think. Talk about an epic battle. And it's got that added quality of heartbreak because Jen and the others are fighting their own friend and teammate.

Loved Eric riding to the rescue, so to speak, and I'm very glad to see the whole team together for the finish. Speaking of finish, what a place to leave it!

really good chapter. im in suspense already to wats going to happen to Jen and Black Knight/Wes