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Reviews For: Jelly Bean Pancakes and Coffles

oywidapoodles
2005-06-29
ch 2,
abuseAww! That's so cute. I love how excited he was too. When in the actual series she gets pregnant then he finds out, I can't wait to see how excited he'll get. I know it'll just have to be adorable, cause lets face it- Luke is never not adorable. Loved it!
Ayanda
2004-11-14
ch 2, anon.
abusewow, that was HYSTERICAL. so (!) funy.
awesome.
The Velvet Inch
2003-07-01
ch 2,
abuse... hehehehe coffles
javaqween
2003-04-06
ch 2, anon.
abusevery cute...you rule
LunaLove
2003-03-28
ch 1,
abuseROFL!! Oh my God!! That was so funny!! Good to have you back!
AspectsofAnonymity
2003-03-06
ch 2,
abuseLOVE it! Absoultely adorable!
Mala
2003-03-06
ch 2, anon.
abuseSo, when I'm on a tropical island with Alex Trebek, Orli Bloom, and copious amounts of rum while Taylor is doing endorsements for Astroglide, I sincerely hope that you're getting your wonderful freak on with Luke in an equally exotic locale. Which should be viable since I'll pack Lorelai off to entertain Dean, lol.

"These characters are not mine and they have bent its pleasure of the reading."

Bwahahaha. This was "bent" all right. I loved both the translation AND the original. The latter being quirky and totally in character and the former just being glorious crackfic.
jewls13
2003-03-05
ch 2, anon.
abuseso cute! you rule, in any language
jewls13
2003-03-05
ch 1, anon.
abuseBrilliant! lol, this is great, I'm off to read the other versian, but I don't know how it could get much better.
jen
2003-03-05
ch 1, anon.
abusewelcome back cj, hope you are doing okay. cute story.
jcd1013
2003-03-05
ch 2,
abuseCT--

This was fantasic! I've never laughed so hard in my life. The Span-glish version was hilarious and I just about died when Luke thought she was pregnant. You did a great job of writing the dialogue--it felt natural and in-character and you had a fabulous little story plot. Thanks for the laugh!

Julia
bia
2003-03-05
ch 2, anon.
abuseI guess my english is REALLY worse than your spanish, anyway.
Lunch break. For once I decided to follow an advice coming from the Pope, and I’m going to fast (I’m not sure this expression is correct…), in order to support sybolically who wants peace (just in case the multicolor flag with the word “PEACE” written on, it, waving at my living room window, wasn’t giving enough an idea of support).
I’m starving … I click on FF.net, and guess who’s there?! YOU ! :P
I’m SO happy to read you again.
I wonder if, the times I was thinking about you, you received some vibe from Italy. I hope so.
Bentornata, un abbraccio
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