hi i dont have an account so i cant write this i dont know if its been done yet but you could make a fanfic of them fighting but inuyasha goes off DURING the fight and comes back 2 find that kagome killed the demon but got really hurt and every1 knew where he went

p.s.I HATE KIKYOU!

P.S.S YOU DONT HAVE 2 USE THIS ITS JUST A SUGGJUSTION[SRRY CANT SPELL 4 MY LIFE :P ]

Oh my god!you absolutely have to continue this marvolous piece of work,personnally, I've read alot of novels, books, and all kinds of stories and this is deffinatly in the top 10.

I like the story line. You should work on format, spacing, grammar, spelling and punctuation. There's no reason not to make it professional.

the discription of the wounds were gross but the story is good!

Hey its a good story and i am waiting for an update so hope u do it soon.

Aw that was sweet! and cute!
And made me feel fuzzy after the sad/no happy ending one i just read!

helloo
love it

The idea of the story is really cute. I could not read the entire story. It was too difficult to follow, because of inproper paragraphs.
A new paragraph for each new thought,and speaker.
This will make your stories easier to read.

Ew can almost imagin that crack*shudders*
Good story though

Very nice, I think it showed a little nicer than normal Inu Yasha but unlike some fan fics I've read, you didn't change him completely. (THANK YOU!) heh, I don't like when characters change too much and you DID NOT do that so good job lol. Well, anyway, nice work. (my work -not ffs but just writing is on fiction press under aLwAyZgRaY02 if you wanna read it) So yea keep writing and remember don't get wrapped up in the story so much the real character is lost! Thankx again for writing this! :D

You have some spelling things. first thing its not BABA
it BAKA! sry... Now uc... i Have spelling issues too! (don't worry thats why we have spell check)
:)
KWEL!

your story line is wonderful it takes a lot to get me interested and you got me hooked

i hope you write the rest of the story soon i likie! -JESI

This is a great story really if it needs to be finished please finish it I really want to see what happens to Kagome.Later.

this is such a good story it's very exciting you gotta update soon!!