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| Skeye 2003-06-24 ch 1,  | abuseI love the poem and sweet ending |
| Demile 2003-03-16 ch 1, | abuseOkay, The "story" (if you really wanna call it that) doesn't have a plot... but if you were using it as a way to display the poem then thats okay. The poem is okay, not "teerificc" but it was okay. You do, however, have a ton of spelling errors. I recommend using a spelling and grammer check or finding people that might wanna beta-read for you. -Demi |