O.o

Are you kidding me?

This is so wrong that it is just right.

...Authors inside of stories inside of stories...
Have you read Snicket? Or Sophie's World?
Just a hunch. Considering what writing oneself into one's stories looks like.

FBC.

PS- It might be wise to heed the warnings of those who say that if you continue writing yourself in the consequences may be dire. Personally all I shall say is that there's no accounting for my sister's taste, but... *shrugs*

*points, shrieking* Ah! Scary-making!
I'll have to tell Purplefield, though, seems she's right...
*points again, but not shrieking* Dafydd! I'm so very sure you're Dafydd!

Bad hS! BAD! In-text author's notes HURT!

Is this a plague of pancakes? Like locusts?
The firstborn comment made me think that. Anyway.
*sigh* *starts trying to affect an official-sounding voice* I hereby declare that if any idiotic comments bearing my name are found, it was not me, but an impostor! However, if it has my name and is witty, why of course it is me.
That's the problem with unverified reviewses...

That's Google picking out ads it 'thinks' might be relevant.
Yeesh!

French toast is bread dipped in a sort of batter with egg and vanilla and ... um... not much else, come to think, and then fried. So technically it should be French fried bread.
But someone probably already mentioned that...

Legolas?? Pancakes? Sounds like an awesome combination, if you ask me.

Oh yeah. Legolas sounds like some stalker out to pancake everyone.
He even got Haldir and Gandalf.
I'd agree with what you say. It is too short. Some of the chapters have their Review responses take up more space in the page than the actual story itself.
Not that I'm complaining it doesn't have enough content. The amount of chapters the whole story has makes up for it.
^_^ keep on writing!

Legolas and his pancakes... scary!
I like how you use solid word choice and grammar in a humor fic. It adds to the suspense.
Legolas is so scary I'm ready to announce this as a horror fic!
^_^ I like the silliness, though!

OMG your story is soo funny! I really hope that you will write anouther! ^-^

I have just been reminded why I haven't been to in over 2 years. People who beg for feedback repeatedly and add stuff like "...or I'll do something horrible to your immediate fmaily" are people who's work I really don't want to bother reading. After the first "cute" send me feedback message, it gets old and it's not funny. A simple "please send feedback to (insert email here)" would do quite nicely. I send feedback if I am impressed with the author, their style, their ideas, and their humility. Begging for feedback will only get you ignored in my book.
Goodbye.

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this is getting boring...