Jack is right. No good agent goes on hunches yet sometimes that is all we have, just a feeling, a change of the wind, a tickle at the back of our minds and if we don't act on it we will regret it for the rest of our lives.

Good story. Good characterization. Well written

I like how you keep bringing up the number three and the significance of it all. Really great read, hope you write more!

Great job with the whole Sam/Jack dynamic. My only nitpick is that Sam/Poppy has brown eyes, not blue.but it's forgivable. Loved Jack noticing that they were in Martin's domain.

Awesome job! I love this story and the interaction between Sam and Jack is awesome. If anyone can get into his head, she could!! ;-) Anyways great job

OOh -- I liked this a lot! Great insight into Jack's character, difficult case, awesome, awesome use of the number as a theme and just wonderful J&S interaction! I'm so psyched you're writing for this amazing show! Yay! Keep writing!