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| Ciroth 2008-10-11 ch 35, | abuseGreat story! I love how you have wrote it. |
| RiaTortilla 2008-10-10 ch 35, | abuseplease please please please please please update soon! I am dying to know what happens next! |
| jennyelf 2008-10-10 ch 35, | abuseExcellent story. I love it. I can't wait to find out if my theories about Harry and his astral self are right. Keep up the excellent work. |
| zafaran 2008-10-09 ch 35, | abuseNew chapter! YES!! I've been waiting for you to get back to this story for such a *long* time, and I'm delighted to find that you've finally gotten back to it. This story has been on my list of stories to be converted to ebook for rereading on my ebook reader/PDA for a long, long time, and I'm delighted to find that it's now another chapter closer to that goal. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm |
| iluvchocs 2008-10-07 ch 35, anon. | abuseI was thrilled when I saw that this had been updated. I really like the turn of events that's happened with Harry officially getting a guardian, and Janet's hunch paying off. It worked really well because she's always had that kind of thing - it wasn't something that suddenly developed so that they'd be safe. Great job, and I look forward to seeing what happens next :D |
| ~Kanxtus`annax~ 2008-10-06 ch 35, anon. | abuseBrilliant! I love it! But I must ask: Is there going to be a pairing? Really, I hope it's slash, but I have yet to look at your profile and whatnot, so I don't want to get my hopes up. |
| Hanna 2008-10-06 ch 35, anon. | abuseI love it and the persons in the story... I really hoe wht you will update the story soon! |
| Serafine 2008-10-03 ch 35, anon. | abuseWow...this chapter almost feels like a conclusion to this spellbinding story! |
| Sirius771 2008-10-02 ch 35, | abuseExcellent story! Glad you posted a new chapter. Please write more soon. |
| Eria 2008-10-02 ch 35, | abuseI just spent the last four days reading the entirety of this and I have to say Wow. Out of the some 260,0 words separated into 35 chapters you've amassed here, you only had say 30 syntax errors or less, mostly in punctuation. And the story is compelling and original. I think the only thing that kind of seems off is during large group meets that a few characters seem to get lost in the crowd so to speak. :) Also, I was kinda startled at Snape's continued insinuations when I thought he had been shown some of Harry's abuse. Even if it was a snippet and considering Harry had come through in warning about the Weasely's, I'm not sure he would have continued in that vein. Perhaps you could explain it better, if you have time of course! Also, I think it's awesome that the Wrights are adopting Harry and his 'pet'. Loved reading the post Harry and the others sent to one another. I'll be very happy to read as you bring this to a close. |
| Johnny Bravo J 2008-10-02 ch 35, | abuseGreat story. Can't wait for the next chapter. I loved it. When will you update the next chapter? Some good funny scenes. Thanks, JOhnny |
| DaisyAnimeluvr 2008-10-01 ch 35, | abuseOh, that was wonderful! Absolutely brilliant! I had almost forgotten what the story was about it's been so long since it's been updated, but after re-reading the last 2 chapters, I remembered. It was like there wasn't any pause at all! I can't wait for the next chapter, whenever it will come. I look forward to it! |
| Seal1 2008-09-29 ch 34, anon. | abuseIt always makes my day when I see that you've updated this story! I'll go off and read it now, but I wanted to thank you in advance! |
| Goatis 2008-09-29 ch 35, | abuseThis story is certainly full of little twists and turns that are amusing and intriguing. I was wondering, due to the way you'd left off at the end of this chapter, if this story is finished? If it is, you should mark it as complete so your readers aren't confused and expecting more, if not (which is what I hope to be the case as this story is so very interesting and can go in so many new directions with Harry being with the Wrights, especially with Kitty being a witch and the possibility of her too attending Hogwarts), I look forward to the next chapter, if there is one of course. Either way, you've done a great job on this story, especially all the interesting things you put in Harry's bottomless box, I still want to know what is in that box that is 'furry', and how all the shop keepers on Diagon alley will react when they figure out that 'Jim Patterson' AKA Sparky really is Harry Potter, and if Kitty really does end up at Hogwarts and in Hufflepuff or Ravenclaw I'd love to see how their relationship progresses - not to mention the extra conflicts I'm sure that would arise simply from him having 'family' at Hogwarts and in a different house. Anyways, if there's more to be had I'm looking forward to reading it! |
| Phoenixx Rising 2008-09-29 ch 35, | abuseoh, that was fantastic! poor Sirius... but I like the new setup. It's the next best thing. Sorry it took me so long to read and review. been very busy with school. anyways, great chapter! please update soon! |