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| Langwurst 2006-06-08 ch 1, | abuseThat'll tech em pigeons good, pesky varmints. |
| Gestalt 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuse^^ Very noice. ^^ |
| snackfiend101 2005-04-20 ch 1, | abuseYay! Go Detritus! A force of Detritus, indeed. Always liked the old rock. And his Piecemaker, of course... |
| Mak 2005-02-26 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat story! |
| Abigail-Nicole 2004-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI love little ficlets like this. Hilarious to the nth degree. |
| BekaJWP 2004-04-01 ch 1, | abuseWonderful, fantastic, great. Made me laugh out loud. I love the footnotes! Did I mention wonderful? ^_^ |
| UW 2004-02-05 ch 1, anon. | abusehee hee |
| Madame Arrow Foxfire 2004-02-01 ch 1, | abuseHm. Pretty good. ^__^ |
| Twoflower 2003-03-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a delightful story, I found myself in the worls of the Watch series yet again. Loved all the gags, "It was the force of Detritus" especially cracked me up. Liked the bit with Vimes and Angua trying not to laugh at Carrot' serious outlook on drill exercise. Only aye am not sure that Vetinari would casually go places with the likes of Selachii to talk about business, Guild brothers or not. I rather think V would make the poor guy to make an appointment in the Oblong office and wait in the anteroom listening to the disconcertingly sounding clock for a few minutes :) |
| James Jago 2003-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou know, somebody really ought to have put a stop to that thing there and then. For the love of God take the damn thing off him before he massacres a whole Riotous Assembly or something! |
| Almaseti 2003-03-12 ch 1, | abuse^_^ very nice. Short and sweet, a nice little side-story that works very well with the actual series. Quite enjoyable. |
| samvimes 2003-03-11 ch 1, | abuseI've been glomped! ::alarmed look:: Glad you-all enjoyed it. And thank you, as always, for your reviews :) Detritus' little knot-tying escapade hearkens back to the fact that I still do not know how to tie a bow knot correctly. I can tie a bowlin, monkey's fist, and regular tie, but I can't tie my own shoes properly, though my six year old sister can (and is trying to teach me). Sad, I know. My father spent two hours explaining bunnies and trees and holes to five-year-old me before giving up and, according to mum, asking what on earth he was going to do when he had to explain the birds and bees to me. To which my mum supposedly replied that there were no knots involved, just more metaphors, so I ought to be fine. Anyhow. Enough rambling. Thanks again for your reviews :) |
| Fayth 2003-03-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseLol! I love it! The whole thing with the knot-tying was v funny ("Der bunny goes through der hole.") and the description of the whole damn scene at the end was HILARIOUS! |
| Meredith 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuse:: glomps samvimes :: Yay, so much Discworld fic! (Even better: Discworld fic about the Watch.) I did wonder about the Piecemaker - someone who knew Detrius had to've come up with it. not exactly the sort of thing they need to sell in your average weaponary store. Funky. |
| Kaitou 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love how you can take a single quote, and transform it into a hilarious story. Keep up the good work. ^^ |