So ironically perfect. It should've been longer..but its all good in the hood.

that was great i want p/c to get together the whole kespritt thing bugged the hell out of me please continue

This is a good start. Write more!!

Loved it.made me laugh and think "way to go Beverly!!" What happens next?

I must say, well done. Funny yet inquisitive. I am a fellow crusher fan and for once, her character was right.