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| catch-katch 2008-07-25 ch 8,  | abusehey, this was pretty good. I LOVED the hikaru no go manga, but i don't often find fics that live up to the awesomeness of the original, but this was a really good continuation of the plot. i enjoyed it. perhaps the line where hikaru says the 'i'll tell you everything but not now' thing was a little unessary/cheesy. i liked that you included the real-world happenings and reaction to hikaru's dissapearance. you made akira a little ruder than i thought he would be though. sure, he get's angry with hikaru when they get heated up and fight, but he's still a normal, traditional super-polite japanese boy. Still, double thumbs up! do another! |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-02 ch 6, | abuseI hope Hikaru kicks his but. Buahahahahaha! |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-02 ch 5, | abuseDarn this cliffy! |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-02 ch 4, | abuseI wonder how Hikaru will explain his absence when he returns. And the new clothes. |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-02 ch 3, | abuseThe gods really like messing with Hikaru.I wonder if they ave a thing against (or for) him. |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-02 ch 2, | abusePoor Hikaru... |
| A Bibliophile 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseDun Dun DUN! |
| Kichi Hisaki 2008-06-24 ch 8, | abuseThe ending was amazing! Hahahahaha! |
| someone who read this ^^ 2008-06-23 ch 8, anon. | abuse...wow. beautiful story ya got here. hehe and the 'fujiwara no owari' at the end just made me laugh out loud. and earned a weird look from my brother, but it was funny. fujiwara no owari hehe |
| Near-Sighted-Byakuugan-User 2008-06-04 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis is the fic I have been searching for. Your style is flowing and even if there were grammatical errors, I did not notice them. It was kind of difficult to tell where the story began, or where the eras changed because you didn't indicate them. It might be helpful if you added in a few lines to seperate the sections. Besides that, I have been looking for a time travelling fic and you have just made my day. I hope to see more of your work! |
| bubblegum-chi 2008-05-07 ch 8, | abusewoah.. I actually loved it! I'm so glad Hikaru was able to do something for Sai.XD and it made me so happy that Sai was written again in the records, he did deserve that, at the least. I would love to see the day Hikaru tells Akira the truth!;p two thumbs up! you're a very talented writer! |
| The Silver Blossom 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuseIs there a sequel? I really like it! |
| Syron13 2008-02-24 ch 8, | abuseYay he dissapeared infront of them. I was really wanting that to happen. |
| Syron13 2008-02-24 ch 7, | abuseAs you said open mouth insert foot. lol |
| Syron13 2008-02-24 ch 6, | abuseWhip the floor with him Hikaru. Great story. |