| Reviews for Bantaro tries once more |
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Siouxsie Delima 6/6/11 . chapter 2LOLZ |
Story Weaver1 11/23/06 . chapter 2The gag with Kinonsuke was pretty funny. Ban passing out on the way was too. |
Story Weaver1 11/23/06 . chapter 1Not allowed to date monkies! LOL! That was pretty funny. |
Uranasu 3/10/04 . chapter 2OKay no ofense but now it's starting to get lame. Can't yopu through Sai in there some whee or some funny faces...you know,...juice it up. |
Uranasu 3/10/04 . chapter 1I like the whole sound off thing _. But ne way kep it up! |
Ed loves crayons 4/1/03 . chapter 1I love this it is so cute. Ban is da Man! Good Job Cloud...btw have fun at DQ. |
Crimson Rogue 3/13/03 . chapter 2Nice chapter. |
Crimson Rogue 3/7/03 . chapter 1WAI! Another Jubei-Chan fic! *Cries with joy* I love the way you are characterizing Ban! He is not OOC in the slightest so good job! Only one small detail that I'd like to point out. Try to put what people are saying in " ". It really helps your reviewers understand the story better. Other than that it was great! Please write more! CR |