for a second i thought this story wasn't gonna have a happy ending but it did ^_^ good job! i really enjoyed it and it showed just how much they have grown to love and care for each other

i never read poetry, but i'll admit, that last one there made me teary eyed xD



keep writing!

A great ending, I liked the part where Gimli and Legolas were wondering what the others were doing and talking about Sam getting married.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Pippin said that he had already taken Boromir's mom's ring back to Faramir and Faramir had told him to keep it, and Frodo said that it might make a fine ring for a Hobbit lass one day.

Aww, what a great chapter. I liked the part where Legolas sang that song about Pippin and got hugged afterwards.

Another great chapter. I liked the part before Merry had left and Legolas said that he would look after Pippin. Another of my favorite parts was when Pippin thought that Legolas had made up a drinking song and they were tussling and settled down.

another really good chapter. I nearly fell out of my chair laughing at Legolas being drunk and singing. That was probably the funniest bit of this story.

Another really good chapter. I liked the part where Legolas was scolding Shadowfax about playing with Pippin like that.

Another great chapter. Pippin is finally feeling better. I liked the part where Merry was having trouble with the food trays and Aragorn helped him carry them.

Another really great chapter. I liked the part where Frodo asked Pippin about the troll and he said that he didn't feel like a hero and still didn't.

Ouch, that had to hurt. I liked the part where Merry had passed out after what ever the healer woman had given him and Legolas said to make sure that none of them accepted anything to drink from her, and Aragorn told Legolas that the Hobbits were becoming a bad influence on him and he was getting far too cheeky and he would probably be ruined for his father's court now, and Legolas was complety unconcerened.

Ouch, Poor Pippin, he's been through the mill and the story isn't over yet. I liked the part where he wanted to sit on Legolas's lap while Aragorn worked on him.

Another really great chapter. I liked the reunion scene and Sam, Merry and Frodo talking aboutr the situation. I liked the part where Sam said that he had been really surprised to see that Gandalf was alive.

Another great chapter. I liked the part where Gimli returned Pippin's sword to him and told him it had fallen out of his hand when they had gotten him out from behind the troll and he was in a fine state the next morning, but found it. Another of my favorite parts was when Aragorn said that becoming king was the best of all his dreams and a great deal more.

Another great chapter, and Pippin is just about ready to serve Aragorn at the feast, that is so good. My favorite part was where Merry was all put out because Gimli had told Aragorn about the trouble with his hand.