Wow, that's raelly sad. But it's cute too. I really like how you wrote this, major kudos to you. Poor Lee. He's one of my favorite characters. Then again, so's Neji. Oh well. I wonder how something like this would end. Would you maybe let me write a sequil?

Tenchi@NaruYaoi

I adored this! There is nothing more morose than an angsty Lee/Neji fic! I loved it and I do hope to see more work from you!

Angsty, but in a good way. Interesting take on Neji and Lee's rivalry.

wow *dies* i love it

That ish so unlike Lee. I like it anyway.

aw. poor lee i usually dont read nejilee not one of my fav pairings but this one caught my attention and it did a great job keeping it. write more another chapter a sequal something!

that was a gd beggining but the end was weird (to sloppy for me)

"Neji who was cold and cruel. Who was rough and unforgiving. Who despite his anger, despite his rage, never failed to kiss him on his eyes, his cheeks, his neck, his lips. To whisper to Lee how pretty he was, how good he felt around him."

The last line of this just grips me, thought I don't know why. It's not something Neji would necessarily do, but it somehow fits. Maybe the cruelty of it, that Neji doesn't really feel anything but knows how to keep Lee coming back.

The story as a whole is a bit jolty. Do you read your stuff out loud? It helps lots. Keep up the good work!

Not only is this piece very poetic, but I consider it to have the most raw power of all your fics. Well done!

great as a one-shot, but a sequel or continuation would be mintass. gods, i never even considered this pairing before, but the way you put it, it's totally credible; totally neji; totally lee.

Ah, I liked it. *pervert* ( ^ ^ ); Not enough NejiLee 'round these parts.

I really like the style this was written in. Very nice, check plus for no errors in character, grammar, or story interruption.

is this boy-boy lovin'?

Wonderful vignette. ^v^ Hee. Neji/Lee is best. Lol. Keep writing!

Sadamexx

WOO!! Yeah! >D Oh, wait.. poor Lee. T__T Kekeke.. Yes, I lurve this fic. >) Mostly cuz it's Lee =D but.. yeah! Go Neji!! XD
*hugs Lee* n__n Poor thang.. fun to torture though, isn't he? XDD -CS