*Mark's right about to shoot himself in the head. Jill faints at the perfect time, so when Chris is catching her, Mark shoots himself*
Rebecca: "Oh, well... Hey, somebody get this guy's heart out so we can use it in Heart."

Oh my God... you are amazing. I haven't felt this way about a story in a long time; nearly brought me to tears. This was great, and I can't wait to read another.

Woah... this sounds good! And I love how you made the characters btw =]

Amazing work! So well thought out and indeed very tragic!

really good one

Sweet jesus, this story was AWESOME! I don't care how old this story is... it's easily one of the best stories I read!

You shouldn't have killed Heart!*sniff* that was very tragic of you! DOn't you love happy endings?! I was all up to the part of jumping on my seat when Mark begged to be sacrificed...too bad for Chris and Jill, they chose to save the guy who fed thier daughter drugs...not exactly what I would call conventional ending...but hey...you're you and no one's there to stop you! COOL! COOL1 COOL! LOL

I love it! I'm proud of the story! I love Jill!

that was a very very good story you did a great job catcha

interesting start to this story i look forward to reading the rest! :) ive also added it to my lil jill valentine c2 archive :)

wow... that was some of the best work i've ever read on this site. I'm only a kid and i'm not that great of a writer but still I know good work when I read it. And I loved all the medical terms. And well the whole take my organ thing wouldn't work because his heart probably wouldn't be compatible with her body with all the conditions needed to be met for a sucessful transplant. But Mark shoulda ended up killing himself only to have his sacrafice be in vain. Any way good work Karl. Look foward the next fic of your i read.

OH MY GOD! I love this story SO MUCH! You wouldn't believe how badly I cried. I swear that I cried for like an hour or so after I read this story. I think this is my favorite fanfic so far on this entire site. I wish I could write like you. -_- Oh well. Can't have everything, ya? ;) Anyway, If you wouldn't mind, anybody who reads these, maybe you could check out my Leon x OC fic called "One Hope". It has the Chris x Jill pairing in it. ^_^ Thanks a bunch. I really really relaly really really really love this story. I wish you would make a sequal on this it would be so freakin' awesome!

Ooh... nice story you have here. Still reading, though.

My God that was the most sentimental ending i have ever read. and i thank you for doing something original with the ending

Whoa. Very Alien3 ending. (that doesnot mean it sucked)