Tohma is one scary bastard. When I first started reading Grav. I just hated him, but a few years later I still don't like him, but I appreciate his character so much more. Great job of showing us once again fear Tohma Seguchi even if he looks like a 14 year old girl (but a very pretty one)

Hi there. I have to admit that I was hesitant at first to read your fic but I'm really glad I did-it blew me away. Probably one of the best analysis I've ever read on Tohma. Wow.

Wow, how interesting. The truth is I thought Kaorokou was cool the first time I saw her. I wondered what happened to her, and now I know! I really like how this story is paced. It simply reads very well.

This was great! Luved the detail and tid bitts of humor ^_~ revenge is just so sweet, but you added some lime and lemon that made it sting and sour. That's good! ;) write more!

Very interesting POV and new insights on Touma, Mika and Taki. Nice job! I hope you write more Gravi fics soon!

--Anon=)

Wow, who in the world would have come up with such an original idea? This is very good! :-) Excellent story. -Otsu

I really enjoyed that. It's interesting to read about the Gravitation world from a small minor characters view, because it gives you a different outlook on the main characters. Like Tohma and Mika.

*nods* Loved it.

Tohma, you are so evil. Anyway, I really quite loved this story, and it was interesting slant on the whole situation. Poor Taki - I think in the manga he actually died? And I liked your description of Mika - the thought of her swooping down across a roomful of people to defend Tohma is quite amusing. Not that Tohma needs defending...Anyway another great story.

well i thought it was very good ^_^
i love this kinda fic!!

Touma's such a sexy bastard. A powerful, protective, manipulative, sexy bastard.

Tachi's new job made me grin. X3

Verrah nice. ^^ I never really gave that character much thought, but it's funny how 'important' of a character she (was?) could have been. :x