Exactly like Shiori. Are you sure she didn't possess you when she wrote this?

"We sat side by side and I watched her think about kissing me."

Wow I love this line.

What a wonderfully written story. Powerful, heady stuff. Very in-character for Shiori, which is so nice (and rare) to see.

I appreciate the wording throughout...Favorited. XD

Dude, this is short, so very sweet and completely realistic. For as much as I love Juri,she really is a coward in many respects at her core. Anyway, I applaud you on probably the best Juri/Shiori fic I've read.

Oh my god. I really love this one!

Wonderful, filled with tension, passion and so much hate x3 exactly like Shiori would behave in such a situation! This will get into my favourites **

That was utenagasmic! Beautifully written and increadiably in character. Adored it.

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This was well written and I loved it!

this was really good. I loved it!

Very goodfanfiction, that captures well Shiori's and Juri's personalities.

Nice li'l story you have there. I'm a big fan of JurixShiori. So, you most definetly got my likings. ;) Keep up with the awesome work. (Maybe a sequal to this fic? O:D)

Ha! Nice to see this side of that little git Shiori. And nice to see Juri finally getting some.

I like that. I like that an awful lot. Terribly so becuase it's a great vission of Juri and so very in character for both of them. For Shiori to realize that Juri has no power when it comes to her own desires. I wish it was longer but I think you said everything you wanted to. :)

Wow, good juri/shoiri story. I like how you captured each charater it was great. Shoiri is a character who i love and hate, you potrayed her quite well ^_^

The tighest sections in this piece are those that demonstrate the strength of the narrator, and the powers of human observation.

Your descriptions for the way Shiori feels and thinks as she's watching Jury, and testing her, are admirable. You convey that bitterness and swagger well. In writing about how she "knows" Jury wants to kiss her, you tap into how obvious it must seem to someone you are hoping to get close to, that you want to. It's not something one reads about often.

We love to hate Shiori. ;)

Well done!

i hope there is a sequel