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| Guilgamesh 2005-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseWow, i don't know how i winded up with this story, but glad i did, its relly a good fic, sadly, you havent updated it in a while, and probably never will, its a chaim, i was hoping to see how would things turn out, well, lets read some other of your storys, bye. |
| Chare 2004-01-25 ch 3, anon. | abuse"Gendo shook her once more, making her blonde hair disheveled." Shouldn't it be brown, and just have her RSI with blonde hair, seeing as I doubt they used hair dye in the real world? |
| EGBC 2003-12-13 ch 1, | abusePLEASE Continue. I really like your fic. PLEASE CONTINUE AND UPDATE SOON. ^_^ |
| Another Dark Bring 2003-11-15 ch 3, | abuseYep, I've watched Equilibrium. Nice implementation of the 'Gun-Kata' thingy. I think I know Ritsuko Akagi's purpose in your fic, though I'm sure you'll surprise me ... somehow ... as you'll do with Gendou. Will read on. T'was nice to know the Shinji made The Jump on His First Try. ^-^ Thanks. Write on! |
| Another Dark Bring 2003-11-15 ch 2, | abuse*Hrrumph* Guess ze German Wacko's re-appearence is already scheduled. Damn. But it's nicely done so far, though I'd really like to know the new character relationships...especially Ritsuko Akagi's... |
| Another Dark Bring 2003-11-15 ch 1, | abuseNICE!! Heh. I guess I just LOVE Eva/Matrix crossovers. Actually, I like this just because of Rei's...involvement. ^-^ Just kidding. Stuff's going quite nice as well. Will Endure the Harassment of My Favourite Invertebrae Hero by the German Wacko for the sake of your marvellous story, so don't disappoint me ^-^ j/k Write on! And thanks for writing this, of course! |
| Dark-Titan 2003-11-14 ch 3, | abuseThis is difinately the best Matrix/Eva crossover that I've seen, ever. No lies either. Also its a great idea with all the flashbacks, dreams, etc. I'm assuming however, that Asuka is paired with Shinji in the end, based on the prolouge, but anyways keep up the great work! |
| Deep Blue Seraph 2003-11-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow out of all of the Matrix cross over this is by far the best of them. You have a really solid writing style, its consise and you except for one small part ive been able to see all of the fights in my head. I really hope you continue this, its god stuff. |
| Grey Wolf4 2003-07-05 ch 2, | abuseWow this is a great fic and I can't wait until you update this! I like how the characters are portrayed and has one of the richest storyline's I have ever seen in a fic! Looking forward to when you update! ^_~ |
| wutdaheck 2003-05-05 ch 1, anon. | abusei came and reviewd |
| EGBC 2003-04-22 ch 2, | abuseCool |
| ShardclawKusanagi 2003-04-09 ch 1, | abuseVery cool! I'm a big Matrix fan and would like to see how this turns out,so keep on writing. Question:Are the actual Matrix characters going to meet the Eva characters? If you make them do so,I'll be your fan for life! |
| Grey Wolf4 2003-03-09 ch 1, | abuseHey.This IS interesting. I would like to see more. ^_~ Pretty good so far. |
| Steve VADER 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood beginning. I'd like to see more of this story, the idea is good. Greetings, STEVE |
| mt_5318008 2003-03-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! Only the prologue, and I'm already hooked. Very good peice so far.I've only seen one other Matrix/EVA x-over that wasn't really that good, but this.THIS blows it away! Keep writing dude. |