Great job. Your stories are always wonderful to read. Please write more Young Wizards soon!

You really know how to piss me off, Kit."

"I've had lots of practice, thank you."

LOL

hey, I was just reading ur fic and noticed you used Moiran. This is the native language of the Maori people of Australia. It is still spoken today by the natives living in the rural areas of the outback. Just a little heads up.

How could you write a fic with Dairine and Ronan!
No! Its wrong! What do they have in common?
Dairine should be with Roshaun!

Enjoyably well-written. Not to mention a fun read.)

Okay, I wish I could say something wise, but besides AWESOME, AMAZING, GREAT, ASTOUNDING, WONDERFUL, COOL, and VERY NICELY WRITTEN, somehow the wise part just doesn't come to mind. I'm sorry I didn't review before, I know I should've, but I am reviewing now, so...

Anyways,

I love this fic, and besides some spelling mistakes and typos there is no other wrong sides.

Loved it. Hope you write the sequel soon.

Wow...

That was such a great story!

Keep on writing, you've got an amazing gift!

Great story! I really loved it!

All of your hard work, all of your efforts, and all of your countless words spent to form this amazing story amount to one word: WOW.

this was a really good story and the sequel sounds great...hurry up and write it, i want to read it...

Most awesomest ficcy...

Since I was gone, this is basically a review for past chapters as well.

Nita/Kitty–er, KIt and Dairi/Nolan–er, Ronan moments!

Very nice, well written, YAY!

-SAT

okay, so when can we expect the sequel to come out? hopefully before the next book which comes out in october. my favourite thing about this story was the nita/kit fluff, i'm a big n/k fan. can't wait to read the sequal!

i agree! that was a great chapter! sorry i havn't been on in so long, i caught the harry potter bug again and had to catch up on some of that. any way i think this is one of myb favorite chapters so far.

That sequel better starting coming up soon!

I'm glad you brought Fred and the Lotus for a visit. :) Poor Ed...he doesn't really fit into that piece of Timeheart, does he? :(

No! It's over! *gives everybody a Kleenex, and reserves rest of box for herself*

Well, brilliant ending. It really was. Bringing Mrs. C into it like that was a wonderful, touching . . . touch. Yes. Poor Mrs. C! Poor Nita! (OOh, now I have something to pity Nita about! Yay me!) Poor Dari! Poor Kit! Poor Ronan! Poor Ro! Poor Jen! (Well, the story's over. You're going to have to indulge me in my fits of self-pity)

/"Now. I trusted you not to jump Nita."/ *snerk* Ah, Mrs. C, you should have known it was hopeless. They were fated to be together! Fated I say! *maniacal laughter*

. . .

Uh, sorry. *blushes*

Whoa, that sequel looks cool. *stares at teaser in fascination* Yeah, Kit's past is definitely something that should be written about. I look forward to your interpretation.

Biological parents turning up and demanding custody. There's a nasty subject for you. (As my family is in the process of adopting right now, I'm very sensitive about this kind of thing)

Yes, it does sound good, it sounds very good. I can't wait till you get it out. *jumps up and down clapping hands, because she really had too many Oreos* Dumb Oreos. But they are very good. *runs to pantry to get a package of Oreos, because talking about them has made her hungry* *talking through full mouth* Here. Have an Oreo. Reward for finishing the story on such a sweet note. Cute Dari/Ronan-y-ness.

But why is Kit holding back? Why? *makes sad face at Kit* You need to /save/ my Guy of Ultimate Hottness. Though, *thoughtful look*, you're pretty hot yourself, Kit . . . shutting up now.

*looks around warily, and quickly snaps a picture of the motherdaughters reunion* Ha! Got it!

You want me to put up my D/R fic? Well, thanks, but . . *winces* But it's so . . . fluffy. And . . . well, fluffy. I'd feel silly putting it up.

Well, I might do it anyway. I had a lot of fun writing it, and there's a slim possibility that people might like it. Who knows? (I might. Must think about it.)

For tradition's sake, I should end this review with being hit by lightening, but I won't. Have another Oreo, and update as soon as possible.

Hugs!

Jen