Aw, sweet fic. _ I can imagine Hitomi's voice speaking those words, they really do seem true to her character. I have only two small complaints. One, it might have been better if it was just a tad longer. And two, the ending seemed a little too poetic. I don't know, it just didn't ring true to me. This was still a good read, though.

! THAT WAS GORGEOUS! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!

short but et very good.

I liked it..hope u write more fics!

Well,Not bad keep writing more and U know me k,Keep writing

Short but good, nevertheless. Hope to see more of your writing. :)

AWWWWWW...so sweet, please write more to this _, GOOD JOB!

*Tears* Never read anything so sweet

It is a really nice story

Aww, that was so sweet. Good one )

That was pretty good. Very well written. You should write a longer one.

That was so sad waaaaaaaa *snif snif* you should make a few more storys this is a good one

Oh my god! That was so sweet! Aww..but its a bit short, why not write another one?