Reviews for Family: Back to Sunnydale

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HuntingPeace 2007-08-16 ch 7,	abuseI really like it but I was hoping that the Scoobies would find out about Cordelia and Angel's relationship somehow. Good job!
lover of zanessa 2006-03-26 ch 7,	abuseThat was really nice I liked it, I mean I dont get see much of after cordy and angel get togetther, it was nice!
Mori No Hikari 2004-09-06 ch 7,	abuseThis is a wonderful story. I am glad to have read it.
Acacia Jules 2004-07-01 ch 1,	abuseWow, so his new wife had her first kid when she was 15?! Cause 27-12 is 15.
dude731 2004-05-28 ch 7,	abuseGood
Japaneseanimeac 2004-05-20 ch 7, anon.	abuseNot bad for a romance story.I just wish you would have written up until the birth of Cordelia's child. A romance story does not have so much "baby" and "honey". Lay off of someof the romance words and get into the plot and story.
Acacia Jules 2004-01-03 ch 6,	abuseHold on, you're calling Buffy the same? person she was back in High School?! **! I am not a Buffy fan, not in the least, but that is the biggest load of crap I've ever heard, er, read. Buffy started changing the moment Angel left Sunnydale, and she changed drastically the second her mother died. Everything became about Dawn. EVERYTHING. She didn't have a life anymore. She slayed, she worked, she took care of Dawn. That was it. Then after she came back from the dead, from HEAVEN, she was completely tramatized (naturally) and cutoff from life. She couldn't feel, she didn't want to, it hurt too much too. It was painful to be where she was. Yes, she was a little self-centered, because she COULDN'T take care of anyone anymore but herself right then, she was in too much of a state of shock, she couldn't connect to anyone. But in no way, was she EVER the same person she was in High School.
Alaskantiger 2003-04-14 ch 7,	abuseThis was a great story just found it. I can't wait to read you sequel.
vesu 2003-03-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseWas this the last chapter? you should have added more things like the scoobs finding about A/C and the baby and just put in more depth. your story had a really good plot but i think you could have spread it out a bit more instead of making it seem compact and leaving a lot out. i really liked it though. great job!
vesu 2003-03-18 ch 5, anon.	abuseYou should make your transitions more clearer like when one thing skips to another, it was kind of confusing a bit. and when Cordy was talking to her dad in the kitchen where the hell was Angel? did she leave him or was he with her? cuz if he was with her you think he'd be a bit more vocal, or Ray would notice him. i was looking forward to them meeting but you completely skipped it. that made me sad T_T and you think Angel would a bit more concerned about his pregnant seer getting slapped around.
vesu 2003-03-18 ch 4, anon.	abuseI HATE RAY! Ahg it's making my hands twitch i'm getting so mad, i feel the need to punch something (inanimate) oh Angel had better kick his **!
vesu 2003-03-18 ch 3, anon.	abuseOMG Cordy's dad is such a bastard! hitting a pregnant woman! Angel needs to kick his ! That son of a ! that just makes me mad! Angel needs to put the fear of God(vampire) in Mr. Chase!
vesu 2003-03-18 ch 1, anon.	abuseDid Angel get Cordelia knocked up? He^_^ Go Angel! I LOVE your plot! Hopefully there won't be any demon activity and Cordy's stepmom won't be that big of **. And hopefully her kids won't be horrible>.
Kimmers 2003-03-11 ch 7,	abuseLoved this it was really really good from Kimmers
fatallyyoursx 2003-03-10 ch 7,	abuseFirst of all--GOOD! Gr8 story! Secondly, u said Buffy didn't know about Cordy and Angel, so you should write a companion piece where they find out. Just a suggestion.

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