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i love ur story. u should really update it soon. i mean u shouldnt leave it like that... its a huge cliff hanger.

damm... its been a long time since ive seen this story.

like about two years... LOL!

Its nice to see this tory is still up and running. My other old favorites are either gone or just REALLY hard to find.

I'd tell you to update soon but you don't seem like the type.

Now for the actual review.


The story is great overall. the length is just right. the plot is not really complicated, but you can get lost if you arn't payin attention(or if you are up really really late.)

The sailormoon stuff i just don't know.

I really like the way you portray the db characters, i too have felt that they depended too much on power and thier determination. Saiyajins are also better at fighting than you give them credit for.(especially goku. the others not by much.)

ranma is a bit more mature, but that is understandable.

This story once excited me and i belive that i acted like a fanboy, waiting for new chappies. this story made me look back at that time and i kept going farther and farther back into my memories. thanks for that.

Update when you can, and remember. as long as the fire still burns, you will eventually update.


Good luck and God bless.

hey i was lookingatyour stories when i noticed you spelt olny wrong.ja ne(hope i spelt that right)

So where did Ranma's curse go?

It's been so long, I had to go back and skim the whole thing to remember what all happened.

Sounds like next chapter will be even more interesting.

Well done. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

Secondary chacter not, okay. I shall read on.

Good. Ranma remembered. Write on.
Ciao,
Wes

I'm gunna TRY to read this story, but my first thought in reaction to a Ranma gets amnesia fic is to go somewhere else. I'm not fond of permanent or mid term mental castration of Ranma. Short term, yes. I've even used that myself, though on reflection I kinda wish I hadn't.
Ciao,
Wes

Heh, I haven't seen an update on this in far too long. The funny thing is I just finished rereading it off of ladycomos' site a day ago.

ah! ranmas a schitzho...a skity...hes someone with multiple Personalities!!

Hm, powers for Roshi and Kirilian? Well they would have to be mental thus showimg why they hadn't figured it out by now. But I'd also give them something to even the score amongst the vast differences in strength, or for just plain humor.

Here's a few ideas:

Innate Super-Strength: Now this seems a bit redundent with them being Dragonball levels anyway but I figure that it takes alot of ki to pull off most of thier strength, well imagine if a Z-Senshi could do the same while conserving his ki.

Innate Super-Speed: Look at the one above^

Short-Range Teleportation: With this ability either Roshi or Kirilian would be able to go evenly agianst most enemies.

Immunity to Mental Attacks: Be a rude suprise to anyone who tried such.

Immunity to Ki Attacks: An ability that allow the user to ignore pure ki attacks completely (like the shishihokadan destructo disc or the kamahameha), but this won't protect them from purely physical attacks (like the amiguriken, a kick to the shin or a mallet to the head).

The ability to see though non-living materials: I can see Kirilian getting embarased and Roshi getting jealous.

Another good chapter. Even though I have not cared about DBZ in years this is still undeniably fasinating (sp?). Good explanation on alternate universes, and I hope to see the next chapter relativly soon.

yay you put in a new chapter this is my favorite story yet!!.. i cant wait god your a great writer