great story! ah i havent read a good one in a while...really refreshing!

hello. i saw your a/n in a earlier chapter, asking for japanese words. well i happen to have taught myself some japanese, and i'm willing to share.

konnichi wa: good day (usually used to say hello)

gomen: sorry

dozo: please

hikari: light

kawaii: cute

chibi: cute little

shikata ga ne: it can't be helped (used like shit happens)

baka: stupid/idiot

i know more, but can't remember of the top of my head

Oh great... Well, that was the end of a very LONG fic! It was very nice though

Nice conversation with Jessie!

HOW DARE YOU DO THAT! I CANT BELIEVE YOU WOULD... actually, yes I can, because you are the writer and you can do stuff like that...

Well written, I must say.. ANd I Love and miss you, and I am finally reading your fic, so yay for me! I had to go and start over, because I forgot most of it, but thats okay. I didn't mind...

Besides, it was a good read. lol.

Off to the next chapter. I just had to take a pit-stop to chastise you for being cruel... but you do it so well, so props and kudos to you.

hi, omg i have read alot of fanfics of escaflowne and this is the best one yet...yooray_-

WTH! Wasn't the whole point of these stories was to get Van and Hitomi together! BRING HER BACK OR I WILL REPORT YOU! Ok...just kidding but PLEASE BRING HER BACK OR SOMETHING!

KOL STORY

Oh wow...

Ah, a happy ending...Just what I was hoping for! _ This was a very good story with a well thought-out plot. You developed the characters nicely and put in just the right amount of detail. All of the Escaflowne characters were 'in character' in my opinion and the dialogue was very well done. Good job! Keep up the good work! _

Great job on you Escaflowne fic! You had me scared for a while back there... hahaha! Well I really enjoyed it! YOu have a great writing technique! -

Great job! i love it!

aww... poor hitomi! and van too... I want to slap those evil... grr... anyways nice job! - Tsubasa

I wanna say this is a really good story so far! I really enjoyed it! Please keep on writing! Oh.. and Tsubasa(my name up there) means wings if that helps you -

well... not mcuh to type here...

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