in your summery u saild sesna almost died I am going to correct u and tell you she did die and was borught back so ya know it is sorta kina already been done

Wow. That's just so sad. I honestly have to say that brought me extremely close to tears. Just brilliant.

Good story.Sad but good.I liked it.

That was really sad, I'm at school right now, and because of you... I'm crying and everybody here is looking at me like: 'you freak, what's the matter' or so... I liked your story, but I wonder, what happened to Mamoru? Did he died, did he lived in pain, what?

Thanks for your story...

That brought tears to my eyes. Very good. Solitude

That was beautifully written. I loved it. Keep writing.

Aww... Sad... EVIL! YOU KILLED AMI! WOULD AMI REALLY COMMIT SUICIDE? THINK ABOUT IT!

So sad! Good job though! I am glad that other people can see how caring Rei is.

Wonderful, wonderful story! I hope you write more, you're really talented. Ami doesn't seem the type to commit suicide, though. Keep up the good work! 10/10

;-; that's so beautifull (10)

*sniff* Excellent...this story was so sad...seriously, I was crying when I read this...

That is soooo good, you made me cry! that's the point though, ne? Very good, keep writing.