Ahhhh what a fantastic story! I absoloutely loved it! XD

Will you please, please, please learn the gorram difference between "than" and "then?" This was a pretty good story, but your improper use of "then" everywhere "than" should have been just ruined it for me. I have not read any of your recent stuff because I'm only reading Firefly at the moment - not sure I'm going to read any more of yours because I get so inflamed at you for not knowing how to spell and use THAN. Don't believe me? Go look for yourself.

I thought that it was a very good story. Exceptional,really. I even had it in my "Favorites" for a while. That is,until I reread it. It's a small thing that kept bothering me every time that I saw it. Maybe I just missed your explanation of it;but why is Wash's last name given as Warren. Unless I'm losing it,I believe that his last name is Washburne. Did I miss something? Please let me know so that I can give you back your well deserved "Favorite".

This was great story! Ugh, parasites are nasty. I liked how you described how everything worked in the Alliance System, it all made sense.

When you said 'I couldn't kill Wash' in one of your Author Notes, it made me sad.

His last name is Washborn, which is why he's called Wash, but your theory is a good one non-the-less. Anyway, you probably all ready know this by now...

5 years too late, but I love Firefly, and I love this ! Haha...

Wonderful, wonderful story.

just came acoss this, and I must say, I'm hooked. Mad props for this story-it's beliavable and in character (so hard to do sometimes!)

if you ever need a beta reader, I'm your wo-man. otherwise, I'll just wait patiently with the rest of the world

Yeah I was cringing and wiggling in my seat reading this chapter. -makes face- I imagined that thing looking like a giant centipede! yuck. and I'm addicted to this story. I may actually be kinda late for work. Good job! :-) -waves-

that is too cute! no matter how much I read I always only remember the last few bits, and this Wash Zoe moment is sweet. thanks.

Ew! That's gross! Oh poor Wash. I'm cringing for ya baby. Oh yeah, you write a mean story Lynn. I plan on reviewing as many as I can. ;-)

This fic has a driving plotline that really has me hooked. You have very good and innovative ideas. I did notice some grammatical errors and I thought your transitions could be a bit smoother - describe what is going on with a bit more detail. Nevertheless, I am enjoying this a lot.

yeah sorry im to lazy to sign in

yeah well on twith the review

wash is my favorite to yea im not alone with that

oh and declaring his love in song was a line of pure comidic genius

thanks

lj

Bravo :D *standing ovation* loved the whumping *grin* Your characterizations were right on as were the character interactions...and I just love Wash h/c :D Very well done!

Wow... I loved every minute of it. I know I'm MAJORLY late on the reviewing front but I saw the story was about Wash and I just had to read it. I loved the cliffhangers and how Zoe and Wash's relationship developed throughout the plot. And Mal at the end... hehe...

Also I like you're idea of why Wash is called Wash... I think you could very well be right, since nothing in Whedon-verse is ever coincidence.

Great plot and characterisations. I love Wash and you write him very well. I enjoyed this a lot. Thanks for sharing.